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So... for a while, now, my character's been pretty much a blank slate. Basically me. Which is cool, I suppose, but lately, I thought of giving him a tad more backstory. So I made this!
I don't do much serious writing, because I'm always worried it'll end up embarassing myself. Hopefully you'll like it, so if you have any ideas for imporvement or criticism, let me know.
Will I do a sequel? Dunno.
I don't do much serious writing, because I'm always worried it'll end up embarassing myself. Hopefully you'll like it, so if you have any ideas for imporvement or criticism, let me know.
Will I do a sequel? Dunno.
Category Story / All
Species Reptilian (Other)
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 13.3 kB
Hmm, not the direction I was expecting the story to go down. I was kinda hoping that the little raptor in question was going to go on walkabout, spy on the lives of a few other tribes of dinosaurlike creatures and not the differences in culture from a distance and compare them to his own. The grammar could use a little work, not that it's bad, but a bit of proof reading wouldn't go a miss. I'm just as bad whenever I eventually develop the urge to write something.
Would gladly read more if you were to continue this, man.
Would gladly read more if you were to continue this, man.
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