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This tune is the closest to dubstep i've done so far XD can not wait till i've finished it i need to fix some stuff up add more variation and make it longer.
(edit - I think this is the layout I want to give it, it does however need tweaks in places so it flows better n stuff) total length for it once its finished should be around 3 mins
please let me know what you think of it so far if you check it out.
(edit - I think this is the layout I want to give it, it does however need tweaks in places so it flows better n stuff) total length for it once its finished should be around 3 mins
please let me know what you think of it so far if you check it out.
Category Music / Techno
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 2.96 MB
Some negative notes. To much echo on everything, subtlety is key. The beat you used also breaks up the flow making bar recognition difficult and confusing. The multitude of kicks leads me to think something is building but then nothing does.
Your kick during the "dubstep" portion is also much more pronounced then the rest of the tune. After the section ends its very boring and kind of a let down of a build. Because of the similarity with the final section and the first, it does not feel like a breakdown, but more of boring chorus. Build man... build. Your tune should never grow and then fall back to the same level. Always move upwards or lower then before. Melodies should be every flowing and building, never like a square wave. More like a sine. Keep things interesting, and change stuff.
Your kick during the "dubstep" portion is also much more pronounced then the rest of the tune. After the section ends its very boring and kind of a let down of a build. Because of the similarity with the final section and the first, it does not feel like a breakdown, but more of boring chorus. Build man... build. Your tune should never grow and then fall back to the same level. Always move upwards or lower then before. Melodies should be every flowing and building, never like a square wave. More like a sine. Keep things interesting, and change stuff.
It's fantastic, however the dubstep portions seem empty to me, I'd dry drawing a little bit more emphasis to the snare at least in that area, don't be to wary about sfx either, The bass could use a little more character as well; something to help make it stand out from the rest of the dubstep populace. I really do think you have something going here though and I hope that I was not to harsh; especially since I only have the ear so far for dubstep, not quite the talent yet. Can't wait to hear the end result of this tune! ^.^
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