Finally i got the time to sit down and finish the first chapter. Depending on the comments that I hope to get i'll change and adjust the writing style accordingly.
Also now that i have my copier/scanner/printer/fax machine working i'll be posting the machines on Deviant Art and the characters on both sites
I'm also working on the entire book 1 of dusk and dawn on deviant art
http://oblivionsereph.deviantart.com/ be sure to visit me there.