I was actually happy with how this came out at the time. It's basically meant to remind someone of an older poetic prose, like something you might see in the Edda. In other words the flavor of cold in it is influenced by Scandinavian works.
It's got a bit of natural feel to it on purpose, but in the end it's a sad- well you could almost call it a dirge?
Much love,
xoxo Nesha
P.S. The text conversion ruined all of my formatting. Apologies I'll fix it in the next round!
It's got a bit of natural feel to it on purpose, but in the end it's a sad- well you could almost call it a dirge?
Much love,
xoxo Nesha
P.S. The text conversion ruined all of my formatting. Apologies I'll fix it in the next round!
Category Poetry / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 2.5 kB
Brief corrections to the Finnish used:
1. "Sataa lunta"
2. Annikki. You spell it right the first time but then seem to lose one 'n'.
As for the content itself, looks nice but poetry's not really my thing (and this kind of English is hard for me to read) so I can't give any constructive comments.
1. "Sataa lunta"
2. Annikki. You spell it right the first time but then seem to lose one 'n'.
As for the content itself, looks nice but poetry's not really my thing (and this kind of English is hard for me to read) so I can't give any constructive comments.
1. Thanks! I'll fix that and revise it later. Sorry, I only know Japanese and a few words in Norwegian so it was a bit of a stretch.
2. I'll just uh, blame that on the conversion from word to text. If I could do it in Finnish for you I would.
Thanks for the help! May I bother you if I do a follow up piece?
2. I'll just uh, blame that on the conversion from word to text. If I could do it in Finnish for you I would.
Thanks for the help! May I bother you if I do a follow up piece?
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