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Also for those who read, Rusty's face/snout is being practiced and worked on. We have been seeing improvements with it in future pages, so please just be patient :3
Thanks and enjoy the little dialogue there is here! =D
although...it seems like something is on Rusty's mind
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I actually really like this new take on him better I think, no offense meant to the first artist. The look of the comic just looks more mature and serious now, and getting better every page.
I hope the new artist isn't getting too discouraged with all the negative comments, hang in there.
I hope the new artist isn't getting too discouraged with all the negative comments, hang in there.
actually it's just on his snout, it looks awkward is all...feline noses aren't sloped down like that =P they're generally more flat to a little bit of an upward curve as it reaches the nose...not to mention it's short xD
and he isn't getting discouraged, no worries
I (Mydnyte) have been providing him some insight and have been working with him to improve how Rusty looks and his snouts (away from reptiles xD)
and he isn't getting discouraged, no worries
I (Mydnyte) have been providing him some insight and have been working with him to improve how Rusty looks and his snouts (away from reptiles xD)
as far as I've noticed my only true and honest issue with the new art is that Rusty's face seems a little small for his head. I don't see anything wrong with this mistake that will most likely sort itself out in the future anyway. it's a great story with great art from both artists that have contributed to it the only other big difference is that the colors seem a bit muted and less bright, though I have a feeling that this is intentional to the scene. I'm loving the series so far and frankly look forward to pages of this as much as other comics I watch. ^^
i admit that i do love a good plot, but it feels like this is being dragged on without any real payoff thus far. Granted, its only the first few pages, but i honestly dont feel as excited for each new page like i did with the first one. Though i guess the sex did help with that hehe ^_^;; guess ill just have to be patient and have faith that more will happen in later pages :)
I'm really impressed with the amount of lineart, shading, and other miscellaneous details in the 1st and 4th panels in particular for this page. The 1st, because of the details on the slightly transparent reflection of Rusty talking on his cell from Humphrey's dome/cage. The 4th, because of the lineart and shading details on his face/muzzle that really give it that fuzzy textured look.
Kudos to
fayneoffur for doing a great job on the lineworking for the current chapter of this comic and for working towards improving Rusty's facial structure with each new page. :)
As for Rusty, I can only guess, but I'm assuming he's mainly reflecting on the events of his first day at work at the new studio. Guess we may find out in the next page or two, eh?
Kudos to
fayneoffur for doing a great job on the lineworking for the current chapter of this comic and for working towards improving Rusty's facial structure with each new page. :)As for Rusty, I can only guess, but I'm assuming he's mainly reflecting on the events of his first day at work at the new studio. Guess we may find out in the next page or two, eh?
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