This is one i've been working on for a little bit. I actually started it just yesterday and put a few hours into it already. It's not finished and I want to make it into a song that's around 5 minutes long. So any suggestions and stuff like that, please let me hear it. I do plan on doing more work to this and any constructive criticism could help. Thank you!

I am working on trying to make this a techno/dubstep song.