That first paragraph summons my inner Pinkie Pie when I ask: "What just happened?" I am a bit confused by it, that's all.

He, it only just hit me that this story has this development because I suggested it ^_^; Final Gamer, that's so cheesie that is perfect for a kid's contest. I thought it was a good idea. Also, is it me or do I feel something of you in Roy? I'm not completely sure, but I have that feeling.

I love how "Twilight Zone-y" this chapter gets around the part with the aliens inside the videogame. That was cool.

There's a movie you must track down and watch man. It's called "King of Kong". It's a documentary every gamer in this planet should watch, and this reminds me a lot to it.

I did hear of that documentary, I always wondered about it alongside A Fistful of Quarters.

Also, what was confusing about the first paragraph? Just so I can correct for the future ^ ^;