Hmm, the legs look a bit clunky and fat. Deer are lithe and graceful creatures, so next time you have a go around with drawing deer, I would suggest giving them more spindly and long legs.

im kinda a fan of the fat legs XD i know there skiny and what not but.... the big fat limbs are always cute to me =w= but yeah i guess i could draw them less.... toony? heck I dont know what to call this XD

Well, if you ever want to get better, it is best to study from life and try to draw something realistically before you stylize it, that way you have an understanding of what exactly to exaggerate on the object.

heeee well i have drawn them realistically lots before but FA wont let me download them for some reason, This was just some sketches of a style i was tryin out. its funny cuz the last two times i have posted new styles someones called me out on it XD i think i might just keep them to myself from now on =w= but yeah i think i will keep the way im doing the back legs here.... structure wise... and thine them ou- why am i sayin all this!? You dont care about what im thnking of doing >:U Im just making alot of stuff for you to read! I'm sorry for that XD hmmm but yeah
I appreciate it, the only way to get better is to have someone point out your flaws! oh and i love your Gallery

Ahaha well, that happens. I'm glad you appreciated my critique at least!

Oh i love critiques when they are done right! I had someone just say "Your art is shit" to me way back when i first started posting stuff, and then they got mad at me for telling them how to properly critique~ i was surprised they thought they where doing good o.e plus it kinda put me out of the art mood for a few weeks

Plus i think its weird... But i always see the same people around FA XD I see your comments and art alot randomly. So it was funny when you commented here +w+ Does that happen to you?

Ahaha yeah people who right out go for the shit option irk me. Oh well, hahah.

Oh.

Yeah I've noticed that too about FA! It's MUCH MUCH smaller than what I'm used to over on deviantART. I also just realized I get a lot more art here than over on dA, even though I have almost 2000 watchers there and only a couple hundred here.

Funny is the Internet!