Hmm. The upper torso doesn't really seem to match the the rest of her frame - chest and shoulders seem too small, compared to the spread of the hips.

She also looks about 6 months preggers xD

Ah, still so much to learn!

Well, go seek out some artists on it xD I, alas, can see when some things may need some work, but more constructive advice than "It looks a bit off" I cannot give.

Even "It looks a bit off" is pretty good advice.

It certainly gives me something to go off of

Thank you :)

That belly is gorgeous.

Thank you! I was pretty happy with it <333

The shading lends a lot to it, don't you think?

Yes I'd say so. :)

The only negative I have is that I always think naked boobs look weird without nipples. But, that's more of a subjective aesthetic quirk of mine and not a knock on the workmanship.

If I can be honest (and a little bit quirky) - I've never once drawn a nipple XD

I think that's something I'll have to learn to do properly, sooner rather then later D:

You should learn yes! Nipples are wonderful!

I love the overall way you finish your work ;) As far as the base sketch goes it looks nice, I think it has a lot of life to it. I don't always catch that too well myself but anywho...

If you want to polish proportions I'd recommend looking at some actual photo nudes, even tracing them a little to get a feel for where lines go and the shape of this and that. I find I pick up new things every time I do life drawing classes again or really fiddle with an area. Although then I usually go and scribble without a reference and ignore what I learned but still... hehe ;)

Ah! Very good advice. Especially the actual photo reference...

I'm actually trying to get into a course at the moment with a life drawing part to it, I think you're right, it could be very eductational.

With this picture (and most of my pictures it seems...) I was yeah... just scribbling without a reference... I was sort of focusing on the stomach and hips, and I'm still not really unhappy with the shoulders and breasts. But I certainly have a problem as far as putting down the shapes of things as they're meant to be.

As for your own work, I think it's wonderful. In my opinion your capture the very best aspects of BBW or pregfur. No background I've drawn to date can hold a candle to your steampunk picture, I love it! I really can't wait to see more from you! ^^

Thank you ;) I particularly love the curves on your characters personally, for the record, and like I said they have a lot of life to them. The variety of poses too. That's something I feel I'm still working towards with my work. I tend to be a bit static.

It really shows here how much you were focusing on the hips and tummy, they really look fantastic, hehe ;) Will be looking forward to seeing more of your art too :)

I love bottom-heavy tummies! You are definitely getting better too.

Thank you kindly!

And so do I <333

They're my favourite part of drawing :>

Mmmmmmm. Nice hips.

Syank you :D

I want to faceplant her belly. :3c

We need to RP again sometime!

I miss the fun we had :(

Still as cute as ever ^^

Yay ^.^

Wow, she looks really cute

Thank you muchly! What do you think of the background? Does it add or subtract to the picture as a whole?

I ain't no master of making backgrounds myself, but I think this one is pretty okay

All natural actually cx

I'm really wanting to work on another weight gain sequence now >.>

I hope you do and that you use this cute little fox for it cx

She's lovely as always! <3

Thank you kindly! I do like Gene <3

:D heee... I always find myself surprised to see your many drawings appear after I get off work, a cute bellied lady of some type, looking full and happy... XD

Hehe

I hope it's a pleasant surprise!

My Australian hours have me posting things at weird times, I know XD

XD It's a great pickup on a bad night from work, for sure! <3

LOL