Very interesting so far. Thanks for picking up my character and adding it to the story. Honestly, I'm flattered.

Just felt like I need to point out a quick typo, though. Right after you wake my character up, I think you accidentally refer to my character as "Gates." Just wanted to point that out. I dunno if there is anyone in the story named Gates, but it seemed a little out of place, that's all.

Again, thanks, and I like the story so far.

oh terribly sorry I guess my computer did not save the change. That was going to be the original name but the person who it was dedicated to kind of stabbed me in the back(metaphorical) so I wished to remove him from my story. I don't use real names (although I am tempted to change my name to Zammorach one day) so I do a sound a like. His name was going to be Gates. So once again Sorry.

It's no big deal. Again, I like the story so far, and I appreciate the contribution my character is able to make to it.

awesome so far im enjoying it just a few errors though which is ok