I was pretty unsatisfied with the previous version of this icon, and after receiving some tips, I decided to go back and completely redo most of it, working off of the sketch. Re-inked, colored and shaded the entire character, and did a bit of touching up to the background.

I'm still not 100% happy with it, but at least the positioning and alignment of everything is a bit better.

Pretty happy with the lineart though. One day I'll understand shading/lighting better.

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