oh no if she dies ill prolly cry :(

bad news, we already know the ending to this :(

holy hell! man she went from bright purple to singed-gray... not good. a lil rest aint gonna fix that :<

Aaaawww..........
oh no..... T.T

Aw, darn moments ;_; Poor Shalls and the father too. D: Fight string old man, fight strong. X3

no no nooo!!! man this is so sad i wonder why she died?

shalls mom repicked the flower with out letting her daughter know ^^; >> roses don't last that long, so they have to grow a new ones...unless it was a special flower that never fades..(still kept fresh, from a year from now )

Oh man, that is really sad. :( Very well scripted, it really gets to ya.

oh nu!

Nuuuuuuuuuu!!!

*Sends a distress signal through SATCOM requesting an evac for Jalaycia to the nearest orbiting UNSC Medical Frigate*
(eheheheh, sorry bout that. I've been watching too many Halo 3 trailers lately ^^;;)

Aww it's a shame this has to happen to Ruine. Poor guy :<

Great job on the story though. A lil sorrow only helps plots sometimes. Glues readers to it :> Like me!

This makes me cry.

;_____; omg this is so sad....

Beautiful artwork... but :(

......*Waaah*!

Oh Noes!

Oh God TT.TT
This is so sad!!
Lovely, excellent, amazing sotry

Wow. I have to say, I dont cry very often, especially not usually at comics, but I'm tearing up right now just reading this.

nuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!

I looked through the submissions I had and noticed I didn't read this one... now.. i'm crying again.. this is so sad! T-T