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I hope you have more poetry to share :} I dont want to overstep any boundaries, but i think your poem would greatly benefit if you stated "have you ever..." once in the beginning, then used enjambment to imply the question again, instead of having to type it out everytime.
hope to see more, and goodluck!
hope to see more, and goodluck!
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