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SUMMARY: 'White Starlight' is the concluding part of what I am collectively terming 'The Broken Colors Trilogy'. It picks up where 'Red Sentience' left off and explores the concepts of redemption, courage and determination. Our protagonist, Cody Carrington, learns to channel these qualities in an effort to take back his life and shape a future he can find solace in.
LENGTH: ~230 pages, 12 point font, Word Document format
RATING: PG-13. There is mild, non-descriptive diaper usage; none of it is sexualized. There is also some adult language.
All comments appreciated! :)
# Just as with 'Red Sentience', a huge thank you to
akastus who provided me with encouragement and much-needed proofreading; I've said it before, but I'll say it again: you are the world's best lil bwo ^_^ Also, many thanks to my wife who has stood by me through some very tough times and urged me to continue writing. 
malix, thank you for being you; your friendship has helped more than you know :)
Thank you for taking a peek and I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it!
LENGTH: ~230 pages, 12 point font, Word Document format
RATING: PG-13. There is mild, non-descriptive diaper usage; none of it is sexualized. There is also some adult language.
All comments appreciated! :)
# Just as with 'Red Sentience', a huge thank you to
akastus who provided me with encouragement and much-needed proofreading; I've said it before, but I'll say it again: you are the world's best lil bwo ^_^ Also, many thanks to my wife who has stood by me through some very tough times and urged me to continue writing. 
malix, thank you for being you; your friendship has helped more than you know :)Thank you for taking a peek and I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it!
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File Size 1.16 MB
Man the middle was interesting and odd, but the ending bit was scary, intense and ending with sadness, then a bit of a very odd happiness. i was going to write a bit about my views of this series, but i have been cruched emotionally, you can read all about it in my latest journal in a few mins....
Wow...just wow. I can't even believe that you had so much incredible stuff to write. I just read the whole thing, I couldn't put it down. Thank you for sharing this incredible story.
I have to wonder though, after such heavy stuff, are you planning on doing anything more light-hearted like from Blue Glow? I'd be nice to see more childhood centred stuff after such an intense (and wonderful!) novel.
I have to wonder though, after such heavy stuff, are you planning on doing anything more light-hearted like from Blue Glow? I'd be nice to see more childhood centred stuff after such an intense (and wonderful!) novel.
Thank you for not putting it down! :D
To be honest, I didn't think I had much to write after 'Blue Glow'. And yet...lol. So, yes, I will definitely write again and I would like it to be lighter.
At the astute advice of my bwo, I'm thinking of writing some shorter vignettes which include the characters from the trilogy. I just feel too connected to them to let them go and forget about them.
To be honest, I didn't think I had much to write after 'Blue Glow'. And yet...lol. So, yes, I will definitely write again and I would like it to be lighter.
At the astute advice of my bwo, I'm thinking of writing some shorter vignettes which include the characters from the trilogy. I just feel too connected to them to let them go and forget about them.
Just finished - absolutely wonderful writing. I cant' say this enough - *thank you* for creating this trilogy. Honestly, its one that hits a very, very deep emotional chord...and each of the stories just flows amazingly well into the next...and as far as me, plucked the heartstrings at every turn.
It may not be your typical "happy days" sort of storyline...but its one that takes you through an incredible journey. One that won't ever be forgotten, at that.
Thank you, onecho!
It may not be your typical "happy days" sort of storyline...but its one that takes you through an incredible journey. One that won't ever be forgotten, at that.
Thank you, onecho!
Just finished up myself, I wanted to wait until I could have some quiet time to read, and once I started, I couldn't stop. So here it is, three AM and I had to get up and blow my nose a time or two and compose myself before I try to sleep. Every part of this trilogy has hit a deep place in my soul somewhere, feelings that I have a hard time explaining myself, and strangely, this time, pertinent to recent situations. Thank you Onecho for not leaving us in the dark place that red sentience left us. The story feels like it's complete this time, and the stages of "Cody's" journeys are definitely taken to heart.
This trilogy was absolutely enthraling. Very few times can I say I stuck to reading for hours on end, but this was so much more then just finding a good story. It was a read that spoke to my own character, and touched my spirit. You sir, have more then a talent here, you have a wonderous gift, and I thank you for being able to share it with the rest of us. In these times of being away from home, knowing that I'm away from those close to me, having a constant threat of war at my feet at anytime and knowing I must fight, it's simply amazing being able to just get away from all of it, in my short moments of free time, to just drift off into an entirely different world.
You are truly gifted good sir, it's amazing to know I was lucky enough to stumble upon your work, and I can confidently say that it has done more then just provide hours of entertainment to me. It's helped me push through stages in my life, look at things in a new perspective, and push towards that ever gripping, and fateful future.
You are truly gifted good sir, it's amazing to know I was lucky enough to stumble upon your work, and I can confidently say that it has done more then just provide hours of entertainment to me. It's helped me push through stages in my life, look at things in a new perspective, and push towards that ever gripping, and fateful future.
I finished this trilogy this morning and throughout the day I've been trying to sum up my emotions about it all into a coherent thought. I cant butni can say that this story will stick with me forever. Just now I'm drawn to thinking in a more philosofical way then I did before. Questioning wether a text book I see is really red or if I had just been fed this information...
Alas I digress into my own fumblings over my ehauxsted brain. I'll say this, the first brought to my heart a sense of security and warmth no other story had before, the second a sense of dread and sorrow for poor Cody, andante third a musing of practicality behind every little event and a comfort in the fact that no matter what choices I male, good or bad, I'll make it through to the bitter end. But all that said the greatest tear I shed for this trilogy was seeing it end.
Onecho you have a truly amazing gift that I wish to be a third party to watching the happenings of you and you're wonderful, emotion filled, characters.
Alas I digress into my own fumblings over my ehauxsted brain. I'll say this, the first brought to my heart a sense of security and warmth no other story had before, the second a sense of dread and sorrow for poor Cody, andante third a musing of practicality behind every little event and a comfort in the fact that no matter what choices I male, good or bad, I'll make it through to the bitter end. But all that said the greatest tear I shed for this trilogy was seeing it end.
Onecho you have a truly amazing gift that I wish to be a third party to watching the happenings of you and you're wonderful, emotion filled, characters.
Hey Onecho.
I'm sorry that I am saying this kinda late, but I thoroughly enjoyed reading this section of your trilogy, as well as the previous two sections. Although it was a sad end for Cody, I have good feelings for Edward and the other protagonists. I can not wait for more stories from you about other characters, or new characters.
Keep up the great work!
I'm sorry that I am saying this kinda late, but I thoroughly enjoyed reading this section of your trilogy, as well as the previous two sections. Although it was a sad end for Cody, I have good feelings for Edward and the other protagonists. I can not wait for more stories from you about other characters, or new characters.
Keep up the great work!
Not corny at all. Quite the contrary, I am in the same boat as you. :D
I wrote the trilogy through some very big changes in my life and looking back, I don't know if I would be so comfortable in my own skin if I hadn't penned it.
And I'm grateful for you reading it! ^^ So, thank YOU for the very kind words!
I wrote the trilogy through some very big changes in my life and looking back, I don't know if I would be so comfortable in my own skin if I hadn't penned it.
And I'm grateful for you reading it! ^^ So, thank YOU for the very kind words!
Wow...just wow...That was probably one of the hardest things I've ever read, this and the second story. It was hard because of how emotionally provocative it was to the point to was affecting me physically. You are an incredible writer and I would strongly encourage you to pursue writing more if you aren't already.
Late to this, I notice.
I stumbled upon these three stories after one member of a diaperfur/babyfur Telegram group I am in linked to "Blue Glow". I was hooked after the first two pages and couldn't stop reading. Same for the second and thirst part.
My most sincere compliments for this trilogy.
Very well written roller-coaster of emotions, from the more light-hearted happiness and feel-goodness of the first story, to the dark and depressing tone of the second, and the third, crowned with a very fitting ending.
Thanks for writing them, I most certainly will give them another read!
I stumbled upon these three stories after one member of a diaperfur/babyfur Telegram group I am in linked to "Blue Glow". I was hooked after the first two pages and couldn't stop reading. Same for the second and thirst part.
My most sincere compliments for this trilogy.
Very well written roller-coaster of emotions, from the more light-hearted happiness and feel-goodness of the first story, to the dark and depressing tone of the second, and the third, crowned with a very fitting ending.
Thanks for writing them, I most certainly will give them another read!
I stumbled upon your stories quite by accident. They had a certain flow of storytelling that I like. I skimmed read through your stories. Because I wasn’t interested in renewing a long story but I know these are very good and I plan to at least read the first one glowing blue. But after that I really can’t get into the next two because it was so sad, one in the dark way and one way in a good way. But I can grasp what you were trying to write. Even though I skim the next two stories I understood that we all make mistakes and sometimes we can’t change the past we can only continue going to the future and make sure that future generations continue on. I’m hoping to see more stories from you because the praise you’ve gone from other comments is very well-deserved I’m very impressed.
May life, belief and heart be the guiding principle to your future for only those who follow their path of what they believe will theysee what light beyond will bring. This is my own quote your stories deserve.
May life, belief and heart be the guiding principle to your future for only those who follow their path of what they believe will theysee what light beyond will bring. This is my own quote your stories deserve.
Wow, i know this story is quite old now but i have only just discovered the second and third parts of this trilogy, the second part definitely stirred up tome mixed emotions, i wasn't sure it was the right part for Cody (Love it non the less anyways) but this last part really summed up the story in a great way, you have an amazing gift for writing and i hope you never give it up.
Also, may be obvious, but was i reading correctly that Cody became a guardian angel at the end?
I just want to thank you for making this trilogy and i apologise if i seem all soppy lol, this story just hit me right in the feels you know?
Also, may be obvious, but was i reading correctly that Cody became a guardian angel at the end?
I just want to thank you for making this trilogy and i apologise if i seem all soppy lol, this story just hit me right in the feels you know?
To be honest I bearly read Chapter books, but this one is different it made me scared, worried, and Cathartic at the same time it's like going through a movie. The life-or-death situation near the end caught me off guard and I was crying when Adam/Cody ended up dying again which sucks. I feel like finishing all of it because I'm young and I don't know what the future holds for me or what adult struggles I might encounter 10 years from now. Reading white Starlight for me is like traveling forward in time and experiencing adult struggles through the perspective of Cody so I'll know what to expect from it in my future if that makes sense. I wish there Were more stories with that concept. I think the main thing I got out of it was it made me less angsty and pessimistic So thank you for writing this Onecho.
I know this is shameless plug but since you've read the whole of onceho's broken colors trilogy I'm actually "unofficially" continuing this series through comic form were Edward grows up and deals with his new life This is the first page https://www.furaffinity.net/view/57325129
I just want to let you know its not completely finish but its substantial
I just want to let you know its not completely finish but its substantial
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