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After the Music Fades
by Artide
Art Whore
14 years ago
So, my lovely, lovely watchers.
This is where we're at. 3 months after completing this story, I just heard back that it was (unfortunately) rejected. I'm not sad. I'm still young, I still have so much room to grow. But right now, this is the level I'm at. I would love for you all to read it and experience what was essentially two months worth of toil and strife, and let me know what you thought!
This is where we're at. 3 months after completing this story, I just heard back that it was (unfortunately) rejected. I'm not sad. I'm still young, I still have so much room to grow. But right now, this is the level I'm at. I would love for you all to read it and experience what was essentially two months worth of toil and strife, and let me know what you thought!
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Besides the small grammatical errors every now and again, it was pretty good. I wish you had put in more about the time after the break-up because just a quick little sentence there just didn't seem to bring all the ends together, especially when the relationship was the crux of the story. It just didn't end strongly enough for me.
Keep writing! If you've done this already, I can't wait to see what you come up with! :)