Love the stinky breath! Nice character :3

hehehe great done friend ^^

hahahahaha poor poor prey..
definitely not a joyride that XD

Did you like it?

I love seeing human guys like that getting eaten. and great idea to include that breath part.
and green drool. XD

Some things can be improved though. If you can afford, I would really recommend scanning the black*white line drawings, maybe do some editing to optimize contrast, and then do the coloring digitally, to make it smoother.

I literally can't do any of those things. Everything I draw is by hand, and colored with sharpies and colored pencils. To top that off I don't have a scanner, just a digital camera.

Oh yes, I remember the times where I used my digital camera.. :-/
Well at least yours seem to work better than mine back then, - I got really dark corners and more often than not the image was somewhat blurry. Anyhow - while a scanner is way more convenient to use (saves you time, less digital editing) you can also do fine without.

There is free picture editing software, like gimp. May be worth checking out.

Have you tried water soluble color pencils? after coloring, you can work over it with a painting brush and water, to smooth down the lines. Yes, extra work but it looks so much better. May need some practice though (using right amounts of water, figuring out the right ways to move the brush, ...).

Either way it will have to wait until I can get a comp for myself, seeing as I have to wait until my roommates leave to upload.

uh oh ... yes, I see. limited computer time sucks indeed. :-/