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Once again I will be bone tired for work, but I got the next page out. I am slowly getting my routine going and I will continue to get these pages out every 2 weeks. This is also the first page that I have shown the Werewolf standing up from head to toe and standing next to other characters. I really like how this turned out. See you in two weeks!
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K-9 Agency, Werewolf and Rufus © J Farrell
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Awesome as always! I'd like to say only a thing: in the first panel the order of the balloons is inverted; I mean, when a person is reading a comic, the things said in the first place have to be more in the left that the things that are said after, in order to do the lecture flowing easily. For example, in this page you could divide the first panel in two pieces, one showing Rufus and the werewolf, just like your fist panel, but only with Rufus talking, and the other showing the werewolf's face whereas he says: "... yes sir...".
Anyway, and in spite of this little tip, I think that is an awesome page of your more than awesome comic, and man, I must add: the werewolf is becoming in my fave character ^^
Anyway, and in spite of this little tip, I think that is an awesome page of your more than awesome comic, and man, I must add: the werewolf is becoming in my fave character ^^
I appreciate the tip and while I do know that....I just had to make a tough decision. If you look at page 13 and 14, you will see that Rufus and the Werewolf appear to be in opposite places. And since the Werewolf had thrown Tiger on the past page, I had to find a way to make their positions make sense again. I just need to pay attention to detail so I won't make mistakes like that in the future.
And thanks for your inspiring words as always. I'm glad you like the Werewolf!
And thanks for your inspiring words as always. I'm glad you like the Werewolf!
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