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This is the next stage of the tattoo that I've been working on.
Give me your feedback, everyone, on what you think of it. Negative comments are also welcome. I'd much rather know what negative things people think about it now compared to me getting it done and then I realize..
I will change [add/remove] things as I keep designing this. So, let me know what you think!
Give me your feedback, everyone, on what you think of it. Negative comments are also welcome. I'd much rather know what negative things people think about it now compared to me getting it done and then I realize..
I will change [add/remove] things as I keep designing this. So, let me know what you think!
Category Designs / Doodle
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 800 x 598px
In my opinion:
You did a great banner. So, if you finish cleaning the right side up a little, you'll have that covered.
Though, I don't know what's dripping off it there at the bottom, I'd try sketching that up as a row of fangs or something.
Not because this is FA, but because fangs have a natural curvature that may fit better with the curve of the banner.
Also, in tattoo's the base rule (in my opnion) is that simple makes it better.
I notice a lot of symbols in there and a leopard pattern.
So I'd drop the two middle curls which are inbetween the X and the sides.
I'd also make the two forms which fall into the X a ribon-type drawing.
And that's about it. I really like the general idea and look of it, but to me those few changes would make it rock.
Up to you what to do with this comment though, keep drawing :)
You did a great banner. So, if you finish cleaning the right side up a little, you'll have that covered.
Though, I don't know what's dripping off it there at the bottom, I'd try sketching that up as a row of fangs or something.
Not because this is FA, but because fangs have a natural curvature that may fit better with the curve of the banner.
Also, in tattoo's the base rule (in my opnion) is that simple makes it better.
I notice a lot of symbols in there and a leopard pattern.
So I'd drop the two middle curls which are inbetween the X and the sides.
I'd also make the two forms which fall into the X a ribon-type drawing.
And that's about it. I really like the general idea and look of it, but to me those few changes would make it rock.
Up to you what to do with this comment though, keep drawing :)
For the right side, I purposely left it like that. I tried to make it look like that half of the ribbon was torn off. It could mean many things, but I think it would mix it up so its not 100% symmetrical. :P
the fangs idea is a cool idea. I might try and add that. the bottom "spikes" are ice cicles.
the pattern with the X and such, is what the tattoo idea started as [http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6371108/]
When I first started designing this, it was a form of this very marking - [http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Cursed_Seal_of_Earth]
I began to form a tattoo base from that, and how that is mixed in with it now, is that i simply copied it and flipped it, combining it together to form that x sort of shape. in earlier stages of this design, it also sort of looks like a "warrior" because the "x". the "x" would be like a special helmet that is seen through. the two parts going out with be the shoulder, and the ones going up would be horns on the helmet.
and i know there are a lot of curls, which im trying to take away some xD
thanks for the feedback!
the fangs idea is a cool idea. I might try and add that. the bottom "spikes" are ice cicles.
the pattern with the X and such, is what the tattoo idea started as [http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6371108/]
When I first started designing this, it was a form of this very marking - [http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Cursed_Seal_of_Earth]
I began to form a tattoo base from that, and how that is mixed in with it now, is that i simply copied it and flipped it, combining it together to form that x sort of shape. in earlier stages of this design, it also sort of looks like a "warrior" because the "x". the "x" would be like a special helmet that is seen through. the two parts going out with be the shoulder, and the ones going up would be horns on the helmet.
and i know there are a lot of curls, which im trying to take away some xD
thanks for the feedback!
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