A project in art about drawing perspective and manipulating space. I decided to have anemotion based drawing, the space i used s my own dorm room.

Medium is Ink and water and granite on Brisol board.

I drew something artistic for once! WHOOT!

Prison

Oh how I longed to have freedom from them,
My parents who valued me like a gem.
I felt constricted and wanted out,
Away to college I went with no doubt.

Oh how the freedom tasted very sweet,
I danced, and I danced on my newfound feet,
But then as my time passed by so quickly,
Something began to feel very prickly.

Soon open skies of freedom and delight,
Closed around me hiding my from the light,
And I found myself encaged behind bars,
Where I could not see my two precious stars.

Oh how my heart misses my home sweet home,
Safe and sound beneath my two parents’ dome.


Sonnet by  red1993


This one i would like some Critiques.