This is really pretty (and a bit sinister too), Ri. You've come a really long way.

Eee, thanks a ton! <3
I was really really proud of this until I realized all the craptastic mistakes I made around the end, though. D: They're a relatively easy fix, though. I just need to give myself a break, though. I think I was working on this for a month and a half? ;;__;;

I know what you mean. I do something and love it at the time, but two days later all the mistakes become clear ;_; I tend to leave stuff at certain stages so mistakes eventually jump out at me. Doesn't always work, but it gets some of em :P

That's a smart idea! However, depending on how much work it would take to fix an error usually determines whether I'll fix it or not, since I use a mouse and it takes way too long to get things done. I can't wait until I can get a tablet, it will probably make things so much easier. x-x So... I'll probably still be a lazy-ass with things until then, but I... really shouldn't let sloppiness slide.

Also, unrelated but: I just realized how many times I typed "though" and I kind of want to punch myself as a result. <___>

Can you get a cheap arse one from ebay or something? I guess that wouldn't be very reliable tho :c
LMAO i noticed that xD

Possibly! I'd feel kind of bad, since my bro's tablet is extremely old and my parents would probably buy me a sparkly new one. >< His hasn't been acting up for a while, though, so that's good at least. Unless it has, and I just haven't noticed.

Apparently, I like to abuse certain words. <xD

Really nice short story to go along with this great pic. As for mistakes, we are all our own worse critics, I don't see any glaring mistakes, just a well done glimpse into a journey through a nightmare realm

Oh, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoy this. ;;v;;
This literally a short glimpse into one of the many stories that have popped into my head. The character in this, Zuritus, originally had a very minor role, but as I began to polish the "series" out more, he grew into something bigger. He's not the main role, but he's definitely an important character... who gets into trouble quite a bit. <x]

I can see that ^ ^ its a good thing he has his pendant to protect him. Very nice work

Heheh, well, the pendant only wards against fear and Night Terrors, so it can't really save him from being kidnapped by an insane spider-lady. Woops!

d'oh! spoiler alert! lol

Sounds like you have this fairly well thought out, put it on paper already ^ ^

Heheh. x]
Oh, man, you have no idea. When I think up a story, I dive deep. And ahh, I would, but it still needs a little more polishing. Plus, I feel like I should work on my writing skills. I know it's bad to compare myself to anyone else, but any time I read something my bestbro writes, I feel extremely inferior and lame. I'm also trying to work out if it would be something better-saved for the cinemas or as a visual novel. It's setting is the dream realm, after all, and writing in certain transitions might be a bit difficult, especially since certain aspects will be rather reminiscent of how things work in The Cell. Perhaps I'll find a way to make it work, though. c:

Looking at the above passage, I'd say your ready. But I do understand, its probably the same sentiment that forestalls my own writing efforts. I give good advice to everyone but myself lol Confidence has always been a problem for me

Ahhh, goodness, thank you so much! ;o;