This is the start of a new story I have created from my thoughts. Plz read and comment?

Characters still living:
Ion is a male fox
Eli is a male golden retriever
Peg is a female rabbit
Theo is a male otter
Haze is a male snow leopard
Coon is a male red panda
Zyn is a female kangaroo

Characters that are deceased:
Bay was a male otter (soon to be deceased)
Grum was a male bear (soon to be deceased)

Other characters will be mentioned when more of the story gets written.

Still more to come...