Nevermind about the second body in the background. I normally scribble crap down and shape it as I detail.

Just redline the shit outta it. I see what's wrong I just don't know how to fix it and it's driving me bat shit.

She's a flippin' bear.. she doesn't look like it e.e

EDIT: Oh, also, don't critique this 3< I see there's shit wrong with it. I need visual help, not someone telling me what's wrong with it.