o.=.o I wonder if I can beat the 32 view mark in a month with this. >.=.o This for Awkore.
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I think you are right about the neck fluff. The over-sized neck is making the head look too large. The leg isn't too bad. But from the end of the ribcage down I think it is a bit too short or small. I had a similar problem on the drawing tittled 'Third Try'. What size paper are you drawing on? I tend to mess up proportions when I am drawing in a small sketchbook. Or when I draw in my lap and tilt the sketchbook instead of working on a table.
Stick some boobs and a dick on it bro, you'll get tons of views then :3 lol
You're getting so much better with your art, your colouring is amazing and the face is excellent!
As for a little critique for next time though bro, the right (Awkwore's right) arm and pec needs changing slightly.. for the twist of his body his right shoulder should be further back (around where you have the light glow on his shoulder) and his pec hiding it somewhat (for perspective) his stomach to crotch ratio is also slightly too long (unless he just has extremely long crotch fuzz :3)
But you have improved tremendously over the last few months, and your shading is breathtaking! I really can't get over that face!
You're getting so much better with your art, your colouring is amazing and the face is excellent!
As for a little critique for next time though bro, the right (Awkwore's right) arm and pec needs changing slightly.. for the twist of his body his right shoulder should be further back (around where you have the light glow on his shoulder) and his pec hiding it somewhat (for perspective) his stomach to crotch ratio is also slightly too long (unless he just has extremely long crotch fuzz :3)
But you have improved tremendously over the last few months, and your shading is breathtaking! I really can't get over that face!
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