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strawberrymog should hope that I beat him! If I won it would prevent the surprise ending that claimed the life of a member of team Adam! Want to know more about this sudden turn of event? Well read his entry silly. :PEdit: This page was originally uploaded as a sketch, thus explaining some of the comments below.
EDIT EDIT: She only got the Mind and Control nutritions.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Fat Furs
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Awesome. I really like this entry of yours. I was a little worried that when it got to the battle, it'd get cluttered and confusing, but you managed to avoid that much more than usual. Keep chipping away at it, and you may even wind up crystal clear.
I know this (probably) isn't the last page, but I'm gonna give a general summary anyway: The whole damned thing was friggin' creative. As much as you say you hate the Nutrions, you sure put them to good, unorthodox use, and you used the location wonderfully as well. Camera angles and frames weren't cluttered or overused as I've seen you do in the past, and most (maybe all; I'm not an expert) of them had meaning for what was going on in them.
So basically, awesome job. I hope you win. (Sorry, Tsumi!)
I know this (probably) isn't the last page, but I'm gonna give a general summary anyway: The whole damned thing was friggin' creative. As much as you say you hate the Nutrions, you sure put them to good, unorthodox use, and you used the location wonderfully as well. Camera angles and frames weren't cluttered or overused as I've seen you do in the past, and most (maybe all; I'm not an expert) of them had meaning for what was going on in them.
So basically, awesome job. I hope you win. (Sorry, Tsumi!)
Kinda how I saw it too.
That said, I haven't read yours, so obviously I can't do a quality comparison. I just have more riding on Stank's win than yours, and I think he improved enough in this that it'd be a shame if it went to waste.
But again, can't say if you did the same, so maybe you've improved a lot too and deserve it just as much. :)
That said, I haven't read yours, so obviously I can't do a quality comparison. I just have more riding on Stank's win than yours, and I think he improved enough in this that it'd be a shame if it went to waste.
But again, can't say if you did the same, so maybe you've improved a lot too and deserve it just as much. :)
Aw why thank you.
I'll go ahead and ignore all the compliments and dive straight into the one then that can be warped into a critique in my mind: This IS the last *official* page of my entry this round. I will be posting a summary page (see: The ends of my other entries), as well as this page inked, later this week.
I'll go ahead and ignore all the compliments and dive straight into the one then that can be warped into a critique in my mind: This IS the last *official* page of my entry this round. I will be posting a summary page (see: The ends of my other entries), as well as this page inked, later this week.
Ha! This comic was really great Stank! You ended it on such a cliffhanger though, you jerk! I really hope we get to see you continue this comic, both for the storyline and for the comedy.
Speaking of the storyline, I like the route you went with this story. Going into Regina's mind gives you a good opportunity to show off her different personalities which makes for great character scenes like on page 2, but I never imagined you'd manage to work it into the vore combat like you did. That was a clever way to get all of Regina's personalities into play, so to speak. Also I think you did a good job giving both your and
strawberrymog 's characters a chance to shine. Especially Adam voring Regina six times. XD And I'm not just saying that because you draw an awesome slime naga. :P Really that whole sequence was great for demonstrating Regina's different powers while still having Adam look good.
I really like the perspective shots you use for showing off big bellies too, both Adam's earlier in the comic and Regina's at the end. The end of this comic has some great expressions too. Adam looked great in slime-naga form and it's cool you could make him so expressive while keeping the slime face. I also like Regina's look during her vore scene on page 8 and the "Whuu?" look in the first panel here. Plus a belch panel is always nice.
There were other various nice touches here too. Like I said before you handle the crowd scenes nicely, and I laughed at you using sound effects like "crazy crowd noises" and even sneaking in a "I don't like slime" on the last page. XD
Thanks a lot for doing the VOCT Stank, I really enjoy reading your entries for it. Good luck! ^^
Speaking of the storyline, I like the route you went with this story. Going into Regina's mind gives you a good opportunity to show off her different personalities which makes for great character scenes like on page 2, but I never imagined you'd manage to work it into the vore combat like you did. That was a clever way to get all of Regina's personalities into play, so to speak. Also I think you did a good job giving both your and
strawberrymog 's characters a chance to shine. Especially Adam voring Regina six times. XD And I'm not just saying that because you draw an awesome slime naga. :P Really that whole sequence was great for demonstrating Regina's different powers while still having Adam look good. I really like the perspective shots you use for showing off big bellies too, both Adam's earlier in the comic and Regina's at the end. The end of this comic has some great expressions too. Adam looked great in slime-naga form and it's cool you could make him so expressive while keeping the slime face. I also like Regina's look during her vore scene on page 8 and the "Whuu?" look in the first panel here. Plus a belch panel is always nice.
There were other various nice touches here too. Like I said before you handle the crowd scenes nicely, and I laughed at you using sound effects like "crazy crowd noises" and even sneaking in a "I don't like slime" on the last page. XD
Thanks a lot for doing the VOCT Stank, I really enjoy reading your entries for it. Good luck! ^^
*smiles* It's not a cliffhanger. It's just a little symbolic summary that I realized a bit too late is easily taken as literal on first impression. Add to the fact that I couldn't finish the wrap-up page (will upload later this week) that would have transitioned easily enough into the rest of the story and delude any potential mistaken impact of that last panel and I can understand the confusion. Oh well. :/
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