i really like how you've colored this. I can see that it needs a bit of tweaking, but I really like what you've got so far

I'm really lovin' this! Seeing as how the grown is shown more, feel free to draw the privates for artistic nudity reasons (natural), I'm usually neutral about that aspect either way.

You got the hair going essentially perfect, and the rest is very awesome (loooove this style). The leg/feet proportions are awesome too, and I do like that the paw pads are shown <3 I guess one detail I could point out is the fur pattern on the side of the torso (should have some darker brown shown, see reference), but that really just depends on perspective I suppose. And the chest pattern should extend a bit further on the chest, but I'm a bit loose about that (since it is general correct)

Even more excited for this piece, you're definitely on the right track. Thanks for the progress!