The land had been awaiting for her return and now that day has finally come. An unexpected visit from a friend brings about a change beyond their wildest dreams and fullfills their rightful places in the world.
Yay I am so happy to have finished this. A gift story for my first friend on FA and a amazingly talented artist,
demyxia I hope you enjoy it my queen XD
Hope you all enjoy ^_^
Comments are welcome
Yay I am so happy to have finished this. A gift story for my first friend on FA and a amazingly talented artist,
demyxia I hope you enjoy it my queen XDHope you all enjoy ^_^
Comments are welcome
Category Story / Transformation
Species Mammal (Other)
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 84.5 kB
Oh my goodness! This was so cute and amazing! I smiled through the whole thing! Especially when you described Ryu, I was so excited! And Insane Kaito actually gave me the crown! Someone has been training him well x3 Thank you so much, friend! This is absolutely stunning and amazing! You've outdone yourself! xD You have earned yourself a cookie and five minutes on the throne.
No keep the cookies, your hands work hard enough with your drawings m'lady ^^
Though I might want that 5 minutes of throne time still
Awww ^^ thanks so much for all the compliments and glad I was able to describe Ryu and Kaito so well XD
Yes Ryu had many speaks with Kaito in order to make him behave for this
Though I might want that 5 minutes of throne time still
Awww ^^ thanks so much for all the compliments and glad I was able to describe Ryu and Kaito so well XD
Yes Ryu had many speaks with Kaito in order to make him behave for this
it was a good story but I felt like it kinda needed more detail, but thats just my opinion. Another thing that kinda put me off about this story was it was kinda rushed at the end or something, SPOILERS SPOILERS DONT READ ON UNLESS YOU HAVE READ SHADOWS STORY =p
anyway, the end a whole bunch of characters are introduced...and if people dont know your friend like...say me, then we have absolutely no idea whats going on and who these people are, we arent even given a reason why she or you TF'd to begin with XD unless this will be continued of course...but as I see it it most likely wont be continued X3
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but yeah, just me being picky and stuff X3
anyway, the end a whole bunch of characters are introduced...and if people dont know your friend like...say me, then we have absolutely no idea whats going on and who these people are, we arent even given a reason why she or you TF'd to begin with XD unless this will be continued of course...but as I see it it most likely wont be continued X3
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but yeah, just me being picky and stuff X3
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