I think I see some of the mistakes, but I'm not sure how to put them into words, do you mind if I do redlines?

YES GO AHEAD!~

okay :B
sorry the messyness xD
http://i397.photobucket.com/albums/.....ide/foxdog.jpg
http://i397.photobucket.com/albums/.....o-1copia-1.jpg

I hope it's helpful :B

To me, the hips are too wide for the figure. most male figures have wider shoulders than hips. I think the exposed crotch is what is throwing off the balance here. if the figure's left leg went farther to the viewer's right, or if the legs were crossed, that would really help the figure look less precarious. The blurry eye does not match the solid lines everywhere else on the picture. usually the eyes have the cleanest lines and the highest contrast in a piece, which always increases the interest in the overall piece. the fur is good, and the musculature is good, but the hands are a little vague. The head may be too thin and long. there's no forehead (which is always hard to determine in a Furry), and maybe the jawline should be lower.

just a couple things. hope this helps you find how to improve it.

thankyou :D

the eye did have a line art, but it looked stupid so i painted some color over it loosely. i plan on tightening everything up as i go, and the figure will be lineless in the end,

your critique was very helpful! thank you again~

I don't go to an art school for nothing! Glad I could help!

lol awesome! what are your thoughts on the composition? i'll be uploading an edited version of this in a sec as well