I don't have anything hooked up for a redline, but i can tell you right off the bat that her right (our left) thigh looks a little slim for what sort of build the rest of her body represents. <3 Love the curves so far though! This looks like its going to be an adorable picture!

I was noticing that when I was posting it online, so that will for sure be fixed! Thanks so much I do love drawing curves. I HOPE I FINISH THIS.

Well then! I hope that you DO finish it! <3 Looks great so far and maybe I'll get the chance to redline it when I come back from todays mini-vaca...not that I am saying I am any better than you! <3

I think this looks great so far. The only things which might need a little tweaking are her right thigh (our left) and her right arm (our left).

The thigh looks a little thin. I think it should be widened on the medial side (so in the space between her legs. And the upper right arm looks a little short. I think you're trying to foreshorten it a little but I think either it needs to be a tiny bit longer or you have to change the angles.

I'm excited to see this finished though! Everything else looks fantastic.

thanks so much. I might have to post a new wip before I ink.