Sometimes an image just doesn't look right. In those cases, zoom out to a thumbnail sized version and create some alternatives.
Consider how compositional elements are going to affect movement in the movement of the viewer's eye. Create a mark to show how your eye moved around the image. Note the path that aligns with your goals (the far left, in my case) and decide what little things you can change (edge sharpness, contrast, detail) to make the eye move as smoothly as possible between all elements.
I saw a blog post that showed this concept better than I could, and with a more thoughtful digital painting.
Consider how compositional elements are going to affect movement in the movement of the viewer's eye. Create a mark to show how your eye moved around the image. Note the path that aligns with your goals (the far left, in my case) and decide what little things you can change (edge sharpness, contrast, detail) to make the eye move as smoothly as possible between all elements.
I saw a blog post that showed this concept better than I could, and with a more thoughtful digital painting.
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Just something I found out by accident!
That's probably totally missing the point. XD
Thank you for taking the time to share your opinion.
I agree with the far left one, for a couple of reasons. When you have something moving (like the locust) it needs space to move into (lesson from photography). In the middle image, it's moving off the frame (the eye tends to track where things are heading, also, and leading the eye off the page is not generally ideal). The lighter collar also draws the eye and breaks up the black space, keeping the figure from being an amorphous black blob (forming a different sort of negative space and breaking up a strong vertical). Looking at them in thumbnail, I think personally I might have still opted for the lighter pants of the middle one (looking at it bigger, they're not, but the small version reads that way, probably because of the locust). The strong black vertical drags the eye off the bottom of the page, which the lighter break would prevent. It's all subjective and personal, though.
http://theartcenter.blogspot.com/20.....ss-part-2.html
Sam Nielson