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Category Poetry / All
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Size 91 x 120px
File Size 674 B
wow i can see the resemblance in this to my poem like you had said, honestly i think yours was better placed then mine though, it didn't feel as if it forced it's rhymes like mine does and it still puts all the emotion in it that really tells the reader how you are feeling like any good poem should.
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