sooooo cute!

Thank you :)

Pretty sure both these characters have penis's...

Lol, ok that was a bit cruel :P More specifically, tell me why you think so :)

-pushes the wolf down and kisses her instead- muhaha!

I take it you wanted to get rid of your face...? Plastic surgery would have been cheaper O_o

*less painful. This was the cheaper way, to be fair :P

Hehehehehe :3

Fine then....-kisses the wolf instead-

Ffff! D:

Hmmm? :3

I'll check out that story, maybe.

Thank you ^^

Great work as always.

Thank you :)

Hmm.. the Lady looks a bit too much like a man. The shoulders are too square and broad, and the chest isnt visible enough to compensate. In short.. I think the lioness needs to look more "delicate" On the other side of the coin, The coloring and shading is fantastic!

I'll take your point there, but that is kind of her look... as noted below, if there's a comparable race out there in non-furry world, she's probably a klingon ^^; I might see if I can pull a last second adjustment on her shoulders however...

Heh ^^ Ok, I understand that.

Actually he had some... apparently I've overshadowed that bit xD I shall attempt to locate some dentures!

Its a good enough drawing/painting or whatever you want to call it.

Though I would say the characters stances/poses seem a bit strained or frozen. Like they are straining against something or what have you.

Also, if there IS a girl in the picture somewhere, you need to make that apparant in facial features.. ie: a lot of women have more delicate features, or maybe you can give her bigger boobs.
Something that makes everyone point at her and say "GIRL!"
No you dont have to give her size H boobs, but maybe define it out a little better.
Another thing, women may have muscles, but you shouldnt define them as much as you do on a man.

Also, I noticed the characters bodies are both "box" looking.
They are both square-ish shaped. There of course is conforming to the bed spread and the bed itself, but they do look a little outlined.

I shall take that on the chin with grace, thank you for your honesty :)

I'm not sure I can adjust her chest at this late phase, but I might have a go... She's not meant to be particularly top heavy, but I could be forgiven some artistic license for the sake of a good picture ¬_¬ Also take the point about muscle definition, though that's mostly the same situation in that she's the strong and fearless warrior race of my fantasy world. If this were star trek, she'd probably be a klingon xD

Youre welcome.

I was just noticing that both the characters look kinda boyish in a way, and its hard to tell who is the girl if you dont know the backstory n whatnot.

But anyway, it is a good drawing its not like my son drew it

So happy drawing!

I disagree with all of that except maybe the face. Although I'm no artist so I can't really say anything.

Nah, it was fair feedback. Cassanya isn't the most girly girl to work with, and now that I look there are some angles that are a bit more square than I'd like. Some things are fixable, some will have to be lessons learned for the future, either is good :)

I must watch too much anime and other cartoons, because even if I wasn't familiar with your work (which I rather am at this point) I'd have identified the left one as a lion-ess right away based purely on the outlines you gave her eyes, especially compared to Balthor's plain eye shape.

Sometimes in furry art, eye lines are about all you have to work with - nice to hear there is a notable difference :)

*Rolls D20, gets 4* Damn... that's far from a crit...
Anyhow, I think it's coming along nicely, I sadly can't come up with any decent critique thou.

Thank you :D

The bodies and faces and shading look freaking awesome. But one thing I noticed right away, is that when I saw her foot, it just looked like one big loaf. My eyes have a hard time seeing the individual toes. The heel looks pretty sweet though.

Yus, I think you're right - there's not really much light there to work with, but I might just put some in for the sake of looks even if it's not quite accurate ^^;

you wanted a critique. lighting-excellent. I love the way you have the low light situation.
Details. the details are well done. not too much but enough. Just enough.
the emotion is SO WELL DONE. ESPECIALLY in the facial expression.

Thank you ^^

Wow! This turned out amazing!

I know you want critique, so I'll see if I can find something I don't like about it, but really, it's just a fantasticly beautiful piece.

I like both characters quite a bit, details on furs, eyes, and lighting seems about perfect.

Your foreground is really good, with great details on the fabric. The 'bed' they are on looks like it's right up against the stone wall in the background, so if that's what's intended it's done well, otherwise the perspective there is a -little- off, but nothing game breaking. I love the night sky outside the window though!

Her foot closest to the viewer looks a little undefined, can't really make out any toes or anything, but that's probably the only other thing I can honestly critique on this pic. Awesome work!

Foot issue being addressed - bed is about where I wanted it but thanks for the heads up ^^

No problem, keep up the good work!

cute~ =3

Thank you :)

kawaii...

the felines jaw is too sharp and the lighting angle is off above/behind the head.

Lighting will be fixed, ty. Angle... I kind of like it, but I'll think about it in future, thanks for the feedback ^^

I mean the shadows fall funny with the light in front of them...

I think I saw the shadow issue - will be fixed ^^

What is the white circle on the bed, some kind of light?

It looks freaking amazing. I love the shading you did.

Within the story I'm referring to it as a "glowball" - a simple, magical device that stores daylight and releases it on demand. Just a heat free candle, really ^^

Wish I had one. It'd make coming home from the local ice cream shop after dark much easier.

http://www.iwantoneofthose.com/30000448.html :)

That's awesome!

Goodness I need to get back to getting caught up on these stories. Just kees her already.

Nevar!

Well, not nevar, but not for ages yet :)

Oh my god this lighting is incredible. o_o

Thank you ^^