getting there.

Oh.... why thank you!

Pretty good here, not much else to say.

Thank you there!

This is pencil right? before anything else, I'd recommend larger drawing space for individual parts, especially if you're doing muscled or otherwise elaborate characters. I tended to be a bit stingy with the paper starting out too (I still am a little bit, but digital gives me an infinite canvas so there's no need for such restraint) so I sympathize, but if you're worried about running out of room, try to draw a light guideline about an inch from each margin, and start your art inside it to give you some fallback space in case you realize you didn't allot enough space for heads/feet or something like that. Also your pencils seem a little dull; I recommend 0.5mm or smaller mechanical pencils if you don't want to bother with fancy art pencils or constantly keeping normal pencil to a point (plus their leads will break if you push them too hard like it's common for people to do in art).

Probably more I can elaborate on, but I don't really use paper anymore. If you're in any type college, try taking a sketching class elective.

Yes it is pencil. I REALLY have to thank you for this. It's one of those "Your doing it wrong and I know that, cause I was doing that too" arguments, really makes me feel better about myself.

And yes, true, I am really stingy with paper like that. Guidelines.... wow that sounds useful

Also about pencils, I bought some pencils that people called "pro"
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I don't sharpen them that often cause .... yes, I'm stingy like that :(

I still prefer paper, for starting out at least, besides, if I focus on the digital side people will bash me for even more reasons and will call me lame even more often.... I hate my family.

Thanks for the feedback in any case