first off, it totally doesnt suck. i can tell thats no 5-minute doodle either. second, u gotta fill me in on this story it looks cool. looks kinda like PERSONA or something.

i know it doesn't suck and i've been telling sy it's really good but he doens't wanna listen.

as for the story we haven't really written it yet but it's not so much like persona as it is like something you would see in the shin megami series(which persona is from)

... is there a basis u can give me? does it have TF or something?

yes. it starts out with a young man based on me, named japser, pushing a friend of his out of the way of a car. yep i start out dead. so friend is weeping and jasper dumbstruck that he can see his body laying on the ground. a demon named pyro jack appears telling jasper he's dead and runs off. jasper's friend starts to wander off in a depresion of the ordial and japser sees another demon named lamia haunting him. jasper tries to chase after them but finds he can't go very far. a young man with blond hair suddenly appears telling jasper he can't leave the radius of his body as he's still alive. the man introduces himself as louis and is offering to help jasper save his friend, but for a price. jasper, not caring so long as he can save his friend agrees. louis, with a simple touch to japser's forhead transforms jasper into a hellhound(as seen here http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6402557 and here http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6403219/ ). the now transformed jasper destroys lamia, which turns out to be pyrojack and another demon named jackfrost fused with a strange power, after a show of strenght the two demons leave jasper and his friend alone and also leave behind a strange engergy. louis reappears to tell jasper what the engergy is and that there are more, all of them belonging to him, only they were stolen and scattered. louis also tells jasper that is the deal he has bound jasper now. aaand that's it

sheesh... sounds VERY japanese...

both sy and i are very big shin megami fans X3

both sy and i are very big shin megami fans X3

awesome^^

hmmmm strange robot/hybrid bird. So it's feathers and tail are blades. And it's feet are rings?

chakram, ask sy for more details X3