This panel was just so darned lively, and full of interesting, random sailors, I plucked it out as this week's preview panel. This is still slightly a WIP, so there's a few things that need adding, but once it gets shrunk down in the context of the page, a lot will ultimately be missed, anyway :P
Sailors are (from left to right)
Pittbull terrier / Dane mix (saw one at a shelter a week ago. . . so cute!)
Siberian Husky
Badger
Raccoon
Timber Wolf
. . . and of course Amon, hiding back there.
Standard Red Lantern blurb!
The comic is here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4260941/
This comic is rated R for adult language, adult situations, violence, and themes of war, prostitution, and slavery.
Rukis is responsible for all writing, and character artwork/color
Alectorfencer is responsible for all background elements, scenery, and landscapes
Sailors are (from left to right)
Pittbull terrier / Dane mix (saw one at a shelter a week ago. . . so cute!)
Siberian Husky
Badger
Raccoon
Timber Wolf
. . . and of course Amon, hiding back there.
Standard Red Lantern blurb!
The comic is here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4260941/
This comic is rated R for adult language, adult situations, violence, and themes of war, prostitution, and slavery.
Rukis is responsible for all writing, and character artwork/color
Alectorfencer is responsible for all background elements, scenery, and landscapes
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Mammal (Other)
Size 1080 x 584px
File Size 822.9 kB
watch out, critique:
I think you should might practice more other animals. The Badger and the Racoon look like your wolves do. Also I just noticed that the racoons hand, wich is holding the mugg, is a bit to big in compared t his body.
The picture itself has an overwhelming atmosphere! You can imagine the noise level. I love how lovley and happy they seem to talk to echother :)
Awesome Picture!
I think you should might practice more other animals. The Badger and the Racoon look like your wolves do. Also I just noticed that the racoons hand, wich is holding the mugg, is a bit to big in compared t his body.
The picture itself has an overwhelming atmosphere! You can imagine the noise level. I love how lovley and happy they seem to talk to echother :)
Awesome Picture!
well I reffed pretty heavily for these and did my best, and consulted with my friends as to what the animals looked like, afterwards. They seemed to get it right away. By no means am I claiming I'm a master, though. This comic if anything will give me plenty of practice with species differentiation, so hopefully in time it will still read as my style, but be more obvious when I'm doing different species.
Oh wow, so much going on here! In a good way, it's not *chaos* busy :). Just interesting. I love the foreground/background color differentiation. Very cool, muted colors in front, and livery, warm, vibrant colors in the background. Not something you see a lot, gives the panel an interesting flavor.
My only critique would be that the husky's snout seems too...jackal-ish. It ought to be a bit broader, maybe?
My only critique would be that the husky's snout seems too...jackal-ish. It ought to be a bit broader, maybe?
It might just be a sort of "optical illusion" since his mouth is opened so wide (presumably in laughter?) I just noticed that at first glance. But, trying to imagine the proportions with a closed muzzle...hmm, difficult, but I think it is right? Not sure. Sorry for nit-picking XD.
I'm a huge fan of your comic.
I do have a question about the Timberwolf on the right.
What's clothing his lower half? I would assume leather trousers but it could also be a very broad loincloth/short breeches.
Sorry, I'm a sucker for clothing ever since I took a clothing history class.
Also, is the outfit Amon wearing leather, metal?
I do have a question about the Timberwolf on the right.
What's clothing his lower half? I would assume leather trousers but it could also be a very broad loincloth/short breeches.
Sorry, I'm a sucker for clothing ever since I took a clothing history class.
Also, is the outfit Amon wearing leather, metal?
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