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I realize this isn't one of the more werewolf involved kind of stories, but I would like to think it's pretty wolf inspired.
Since I know there are a lot of flaws with it, one of them being the sheer length, I'd like to get thought out critiques or comments, if at all possible. Or if you don't like something, just point out one thing you don't like. But positive feedback is always welcome, as well.
Was thinking of making another story to go along with this one, one that explains the back story that goes on through the POV of Charlie, since this one's told by Andy, just to add more depth and hopefully remove some confusion.
Since I know there are a lot of flaws with it, one of them being the sheer length, I'd like to get thought out critiques or comments, if at all possible. Or if you don't like something, just point out one thing you don't like. But positive feedback is always welcome, as well.
Was thinking of making another story to go along with this one, one that explains the back story that goes on through the POV of Charlie, since this one's told by Andy, just to add more depth and hopefully remove some confusion.
Category Story / Animal related (non-anthro)
Species Wolf
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 28.4 kB
I read a poem today that reminded me of this story, and so decided to leave a comment. Sorry I didn't leave one when I first read it - as with most stories I read on this site, I couldn't think of anything more intelligent to say beyond "I enjoyed reading it," and so didn't say anything at all. (I'm trying to get into the habit of saying at least that much, though).
Anyway, as to the actual story: I enjoyed reading it - it definitely had some interesting ideas (I mean that in a good way). If I had to name something I didn't like, though, it would be that the wife character was sort of unlikeable. I get that that was the point, but I would have preferred that she have a more understandable reason for being against the main character seeing Charlie. (Maybe there was one given, and I'm just not remembering - I apologize if that's the case). I did enjoy it overall, like I said. Thanks for posting.
Anyway, as to the actual story: I enjoyed reading it - it definitely had some interesting ideas (I mean that in a good way). If I had to name something I didn't like, though, it would be that the wife character was sort of unlikeable. I get that that was the point, but I would have preferred that she have a more understandable reason for being against the main character seeing Charlie. (Maybe there was one given, and I'm just not remembering - I apologize if that's the case). I did enjoy it overall, like I said. Thanks for posting.
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