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Ibun
Mr. Ibun wanted his adorable character cheering on his favorite team! so go Dodgers!
My beef with this drawing is the colors seem to blend together and it's kind of hard to tell what's going on especially in the facial area. If you all have any critique feel free to let me! I must get stronger!
Ibun Mr. Ibun wanted his adorable character cheering on his favorite team! so go Dodgers!
My beef with this drawing is the colors seem to blend together and it's kind of hard to tell what's going on especially in the facial area. If you all have any critique feel free to let me! I must get stronger!
Category All / All
Species Housecat
Size 1000 x 658px
File Size 382.2 kB
Listed in Folders
I agree this turned out pretty well, though I feel like you made it even more difficult than it needed to be with the way you drew my pose. I have heard many artists say that one of the hardest things to do is draw clothing, especially fabric, because of the way it moves and falls on the body. I'd say if this was a commission I would have asked you to do a little bit more in terms of cleaning it up a bit; but I think it looks fine this way. (I still feel bad about nitpicking so much! D:)
One thing I will say though is, in the future you might want to find some way to fit both the drawing program and the chat into the same window. It was a bit frustrating to try and give feedback only to have you see it a few minutes later after you had moved on to another part of the picture. Just as an example when I asked that you change the word game to the word win. It wasn't until you had finished adjusting, stylizing and placing the word game that you saw my request. It wasn't a big deal for me personally, you know I was happy with just the picture of me as I had; but you did ask for feedback and it felt like there was a slight disconnect in the line of communication. :)
One thing I will say though is, in the future you might want to find some way to fit both the drawing program and the chat into the same window. It was a bit frustrating to try and give feedback only to have you see it a few minutes later after you had moved on to another part of the picture. Just as an example when I asked that you change the word game to the word win. It wasn't until you had finished adjusting, stylizing and placing the word game that you saw my request. It wasn't a big deal for me personally, you know I was happy with just the picture of me as I had; but you did ask for feedback and it felt like there was a slight disconnect in the line of communication. :)
Ibun, I can;t thank you enough for this post! to me the greatest response I could receive from anyone is gratitude combined with lots of constructive criticism! Right now my biggest weaknesses are my anatomy and clothing and I drastically need to practice. As for the chat window my ultimate goal would be to have it so you all can also see a small window in one of the corners where you can see me. This make things more personal and engaging if you can see my reaction to the drawing itself along with your posts. Also my second monitor is in the shop right now and that's why I'm having to bounce around between spaces -_-, I usually keep the chat and art reference over on it, but when it get's back It'll make interacting with you guys a lot easier!
Again thanks for the feed back and so long as your polite, which you were, never feel bad about critique!
Cheers!
Again thanks for the feed back and so long as your polite, which you were, never feel bad about critique!
Cheers!
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