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The Lightbringer’s den is an amazing place. It’s a cave where wolves hang out and have drinks of water from cups of wood. And is also where we make plans for the day. Usually, those plans are “huntfor food until we make an actual plan.” Now, we could actually make an actual plan instead of procrastinating for years (Decades to us wolves).
Oh yeah, time. To us wolves, it is longer than it is to humans. One human second is one wolf minute. A human minute is a wolf hour. A human hour is a wolf day. A human day is a wolf week. A human week is a wolf month. A wolf year is a human month. A wolf decade is 1 human year. A wolf century is 10 human years. A wolf millennium is 100 human years. A wolf eon is 1,000 human years. And you get the point. So when I say a decade, I mean a WOLF decade.
Anyway, enough prattle about time. I am approaching Solar, who is at the end of the cave. Thank goodness Star isn’t there, because when Solar and her are together, they act endlessly romantic, and I wouldn’t be able to deliver the info.
“Oh hey.” Solar said. “Before you defeated Fog… somehow… you said you had information to share about the Darkscars.”
“Yes, that’s right. I said. “The Darkscars have a traitor among them.” Solar gasped. “THAT IS VERY USEFUL INFORMATION! Thank you so much. I already have a plan in my head!” “What is it?” I asked. “We could tell the Darkscars that there is a traitor among them. This will cause them to be on edge. Then after a while of this, we could tell them there is no traitor and that it was just a tactical joke, then the traitor strikes! I wonder who will tell them though…” He said. “I could. After all, I know who the traitor is, plus, I can escape.” I said.
“Perfect!” Solar responded. And we shook paws. “We will call it Operation Deception. If you do this successfully, Omni, I will promote you to Mid-Rank!”
YES! This is my opportunity to finally end this stream of humiliating nonsense! No longer will I be “Omni the Omega.”
And all I need to do is deceive like crazy!
Yeah, that was poorly written, especially the first two paragraphs. The part about the wolves drinking from cups of wood always makes me wince, how were the cups built by animals that don't have opposable thumbs? (humans aren't in Wolf Wars)
The time relation in the second paragraph was also not to scale. This is why, in the rewrite, instead of using all the crazy terms we use to describe time, it's simpler; there's moons, and there's full moons. Maybe I'll even use the heartbeat thing I've heard about.
The Lightbringer’s den is an amazing place. It’s a cave where wolves hang out and have drinks of water from cups of wood. And is also where we make plans for the day. Usually, those plans are “huntfor food until we make an actual plan.” Now, we could actually make an actual plan instead of procrastinating for years (Decades to us wolves).
Oh yeah, time. To us wolves, it is longer than it is to humans. One human second is one wolf minute. A human minute is a wolf hour. A human hour is a wolf day. A human day is a wolf week. A human week is a wolf month. A wolf year is a human month. A wolf decade is 1 human year. A wolf century is 10 human years. A wolf millennium is 100 human years. A wolf eon is 1,000 human years. And you get the point. So when I say a decade, I mean a WOLF decade.
Anyway, enough prattle about time. I am approaching Solar, who is at the end of the cave. Thank goodness Star isn’t there, because when Solar and her are together, they act endlessly romantic, and I wouldn’t be able to deliver the info.
“Oh hey.” Solar said. “Before you defeated Fog… somehow… you said you had information to share about the Darkscars.”
“Yes, that’s right. I said. “The Darkscars have a traitor among them.” Solar gasped. “THAT IS VERY USEFUL INFORMATION! Thank you so much. I already have a plan in my head!” “What is it?” I asked. “We could tell the Darkscars that there is a traitor among them. This will cause them to be on edge. Then after a while of this, we could tell them there is no traitor and that it was just a tactical joke, then the traitor strikes! I wonder who will tell them though…” He said. “I could. After all, I know who the traitor is, plus, I can escape.” I said.
“Perfect!” Solar responded. And we shook paws. “We will call it Operation Deception. If you do this successfully, Omni, I will promote you to Mid-Rank!”
YES! This is my opportunity to finally end this stream of humiliating nonsense! No longer will I be “Omni the Omega.”
And all I need to do is deceive like crazy!
Yeah, that was poorly written, especially the first two paragraphs. The part about the wolves drinking from cups of wood always makes me wince, how were the cups built by animals that don't have opposable thumbs? (humans aren't in Wolf Wars)
The time relation in the second paragraph was also not to scale. This is why, in the rewrite, instead of using all the crazy terms we use to describe time, it's simpler; there's moons, and there's full moons. Maybe I'll even use the heartbeat thing I've heard about.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Wolf
Size 724 x 543px
File Size 100.5 kB
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