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Wow, I haven't submitted anything in quite awhile.
Anyway, here's some random cat person, thing I drew. I've been trying to get a better artistic style. So far so good, in my opinion.
I would not mind any constructive criticism.
Anyway, here's some random cat person, thing I drew. I've been trying to get a better artistic style. So far so good, in my opinion.
I would not mind any constructive criticism.
Category All / Doodle
Species Housecat
Size 600 x 600px
File Size 308.3 kB
Yuki is pretty and stuff, but in these finished products, you add a lot of detail, and I mean A LOT of unnecessary detail (background, eyes, that shooting star). This is more applicable to your full body pictures, but I recommend you to cover all of your bases (anatomy, facial expression, head degrees) before you make it pretty with color. To me, colors are the least important, because without a good sketch and ink, no doubt it'll look freaky with color.
This was the only drawing I have and will ever do like this. When it comes to self-critique, you should know more than anyone I take it down to any one bump in a line of the finished product of a drawing. Here's what I see here"
-The head is awkwardly shaped
-The lines aren't smooth and don't transition well
-The ears are misformed and much too pointed
-The colors are way off. I put a very light blue on pink, what was I thinking?
-There is a huge lack of detail
-The eyes are too big and they aren't shaped properly
-I'm not even going to mention the amount of fail in the hair
-The face position doesn't correlate with the head position
I could go on. I suppose a lot can happen in 4 months :P
-The head is awkwardly shaped
-The lines aren't smooth and don't transition well
-The ears are misformed and much too pointed
-The colors are way off. I put a very light blue on pink, what was I thinking?
-There is a huge lack of detail
-The eyes are too big and they aren't shaped properly
-I'm not even going to mention the amount of fail in the hair
-The face position doesn't correlate with the head position
I could go on. I suppose a lot can happen in 4 months :P
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