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Matthew is out to send another message to someone in Arborton, but is stopped by an orc when trying to take a shortcut. The orc takes him away to an underground hot spring where he casts a spell on him.
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HEY! remember Matthew from my minotaur TF story? I realized months ago that he makes for EXCELLENT TF Fodder! Now there's no chronological order to each transformation, and I don't even know if they take place in the same universe or if they're each alternate versions of Matthew, but either way here's another story with him, where he becomes an orc. Hope you enjoy!
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HEY! remember Matthew from my minotaur TF story? I realized months ago that he makes for EXCELLENT TF Fodder! Now there's no chronological order to each transformation, and I don't even know if they take place in the same universe or if they're each alternate versions of Matthew, but either way here's another story with him, where he becomes an orc. Hope you enjoy!
Category Story / Transformation
Species Orc
Size 120 x 111px
File Size 70.1 kB
Still a good story!
However, I kept thinking about a few things while reading it.
I always felt that the protagonists were overly compliant when encountering strangers or enemies. In this story, the protagonist encountered orcs, but the protagonist did almost nothing the orcs asked him to do, and he didn't effectively resist. That's a bit strange.
Also, I was curious about how the protagonist felt after becoming an orc, but the story ended there, which I found somewhat regrettable.
However, I kept thinking about a few things while reading it.
I always felt that the protagonists were overly compliant when encountering strangers or enemies. In this story, the protagonist encountered orcs, but the protagonist did almost nothing the orcs asked him to do, and he didn't effectively resist. That's a bit strange.
Also, I was curious about how the protagonist felt after becoming an orc, but the story ended there, which I found somewhat regrettable.
thanks for the feedback! I'll try to keep this in mind in the future.
I might write a post TF story for this specific situation, because I also wanted to show more of the orcs. one thing that kept me from doing so was potentially needing to write in orcish. I didn't want to miss out on the opportunity of using an orcish conlang, but the conlang I'm working on is not close to being presentable. So if I have more to say later, I'll definitely write that post TF story!
I might write a post TF story for this specific situation, because I also wanted to show more of the orcs. one thing that kept me from doing so was potentially needing to write in orcish. I didn't want to miss out on the opportunity of using an orcish conlang, but the conlang I'm working on is not close to being presentable. So if I have more to say later, I'll definitely write that post TF story!
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