This one I wrote in a day and recorded in 2. The song nearly shows off my full range ^^ I didn't go the lowest, but the high notes in the final chorus are as high as I can COMFORTABLY go. I can go a couple notes higher but my voice breaks and crap. Still, I'm proud! =D I also like how the instrumental arrangement came out.
I think I'm addicted to giving songs "epic" finales =3
I hope you like it!
[Lyrics]
Stood up to see
The world is still pushing down on me
Is this retreat
the only choice there is left for me?
Well I will not fall
No I will not fall
Near is the day
When you and I finally get away
Or should I say
I hope that it all plays out my way?
Well if you say love is real
Won't you think twice?
Think twice before you go breaking my...
No matter what the world today
plans to do tomorrow
No matter what mistakes I made
I'll just hide my sorrows
And hope that everything plays out alright
Help me believe not all of this is a lie
Stood up to see
The world is still pushing down on me
Is this retreat
the only choice there is left for me?
Sometimes I feel like all this will disappear
And yet I know it's all my fault for walking
Barefoot in a field of glass but...
I will not fall
I will not fall
I will not fall
I will not fall
I think I'm addicted to giving songs "epic" finales =3
I hope you like it!
[Lyrics]
Stood up to see
The world is still pushing down on me
Is this retreat
the only choice there is left for me?
Well I will not fall
No I will not fall
Near is the day
When you and I finally get away
Or should I say
I hope that it all plays out my way?
Well if you say love is real
Won't you think twice?
Think twice before you go breaking my...
No matter what the world today
plans to do tomorrow
No matter what mistakes I made
I'll just hide my sorrows
And hope that everything plays out alright
Help me believe not all of this is a lie
Stood up to see
The world is still pushing down on me
Is this retreat
the only choice there is left for me?
Sometimes I feel like all this will disappear
And yet I know it's all my fault for walking
Barefoot in a field of glass but...
I will not fall
I will not fall
I will not fall
I will not fall
Category Music / Rock
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Size 120 x 120px
File Size 6.08 MB
Thank you so much! =D I definitely put a lot of work to the lyrics, so I'm glad they're good =P
As for the emptiness, it was mostly desired. The whole beginning is supposed to sound kinda quiet and distant, and then there's the change in the middle where the drums are left completely on their own. Even when the guitar kicks in, I still felt like the song should carry its distant feel so I used a lot of reverb on everything. Hopefully I didn't exagerate D= But thanks a lot for the feedback! =3
Thanks a lot for listening and commenting!!
As for the emptiness, it was mostly desired. The whole beginning is supposed to sound kinda quiet and distant, and then there's the change in the middle where the drums are left completely on their own. Even when the guitar kicks in, I still felt like the song should carry its distant feel so I used a lot of reverb on everything. Hopefully I didn't exagerate D= But thanks a lot for the feedback! =3
Thanks a lot for listening and commenting!!
I know, right? It's cool though, most musicians support each other, or at least listen to others. I spend a few hours of my day just listening to others' new creations ^^
You should watch the furry_musicians group. They do a weekly spotlight of cool songs.
You should watch the furry_musicians group. They do a weekly spotlight of cool songs.
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