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PLEASE COMMENT BEFORE FAVING!! I LIKE TO HEAR YOUR THOUGHTS ON MY ART.. THANK YOU!
First: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6329991/
Second: Lookin at it
Third: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6330279/
So now here's where it gets sqruashed up and has too many panals on it and just out of wack. XP That's why I want to be critigue on these for advice and all to know how to improve on this. Anyways here's what's going on. And my cat Calie smudge the corner with her muddy paws XP
So after Leo gets shot. Krystal is wondering why she's not feeling any pain she slowly opens her eyes. Blinks and looks next to her to be shocked to find Leo faced down on the ground bleeding badly from his wound. She rolls him over on his back resting him on her lap. Leo winced and looks up to Krystal weakly and tells her he loves her before passing out.
vvv The List for this Challenge is Below! vvv
100 Theme Challenge Journal~
AND FOR THE LIFE OF ME PLEASE CRITIQUE!!First: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6329991/
Second: Lookin at it
Third: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6330279/
So now here's where it gets sqruashed up and has too many panals on it and just out of wack. XP That's why I want to be critigue on these for advice and all to know how to improve on this. Anyways here's what's going on. And my cat Calie smudge the corner with her muddy paws XP
So after Leo gets shot. Krystal is wondering why she's not feeling any pain she slowly opens her eyes. Blinks and looks next to her to be shocked to find Leo faced down on the ground bleeding badly from his wound. She rolls him over on his back resting him on her lap. Leo winced and looks up to Krystal weakly and tells her he loves her before passing out.
PANALS
1 - *eye sqreezed shut*
2 - Krystal: Huh?
3 - Krystal: What Happened?
4 - *looks to her right*
5 - *gasps*
6 - Krystal: No...
7 - Krystal: Leo!?
8 - *rolls Leo over*
9 - Krystal: L-Leo. Hang on I'll get us out of here...
Leo: *groans*
10 - Leo: Krystal..?
11 - Leo: I...
12 - Leo: L-love... You...
13 - *passes out*
14 - Krystal: Leo? Leo!?
15 - LEO!!vvv The List for this Challenge is Below! vvv
100 Theme Challenge Journal~
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Sonic
Species Mammal (Other)
Size 920 x 1204px
File Size 1.18 MB
ok meats and potatoes this is what I like to see.....unfortunately it's waaaaaaaay too busy of a scene a sad moment should flow easily it's just a lil too detailed here by this means you shouldn't have so many boxes for a sad moment now a good reason to have many panals for this is to show her expressions from sorrow to pissed I give it a 6 outta 10
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