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Spelunker_Sal here.
Here's Page 4! Gian isn't accepting Mondo's apology... Right away at least. Will he come to forgive him for what he did? Mondo probably just wants peace all around. Either way Gian tricks himself to returning to his state of happiness before Mondo came and dropped a bomb on him. Is Santino going to notice...?
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Spelunker_Sal here.Here's Page 4! Gian isn't accepting Mondo's apology... Right away at least. Will he come to forgive him for what he did? Mondo probably just wants peace all around. Either way Gian tricks himself to returning to his state of happiness before Mondo came and dropped a bomb on him. Is Santino going to notice...?
Story by:
DreamousArt by:
Spelunker_SalCreated and Conceptualized by:
Certain species and names herein © to Nintendo, Namco-Bandai/Toei, and their respective owners.
Gian's First (Gian's past, side-story)
by
These are My Reflections (Jr's past, side-story)
by:
Click here to start from Arc 1!
Click here to start from Arc 2!<<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>>
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Well, at least this'll be a good lil parting gift for him ^^ (More info here: http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/2623572/ X3)
Also, Gian's expression. Freakin wide-eyed XD It's looks so fake and yet so cuuuuuuuuute~ XD
ill go back to my corner now LOL
beautiful drawings as usual <3<3
but still, after what happened there i really wouldnt want to see him again for some time, even if i knew that he was gay, too :P
+20exp
had my share of those moments...
hey Sal, you're artwork is getting really HQ... doing really good. ^.=.^ can't wait for that next page!
When I saw him do that, and his 'happy' face, I almost burst out laughing!
You seem to have gotten a new level of competence
Yet the refusal isn't jerkish either. Nice balance.
But I love the sudden happiness, wish I could do that all the time lol The power of bipolarness!
Thanks for this page, I hope the next is coming soon
I bet Gian's tail gives him away to Santino.
Weird. :D
On that note, whenever I feel down, I think I'll just cite from the book of Giancarlo for now on. "HAAAAAAAAAPPPPPYYYYYY....." FTW.
Btw, I don't think he's saying that, i think its' one of Sal's trademark onomatopeias "Like "disinfect!" on Arc 2"
Very nice =P
For some reason the whole thing made me though on that April fool's episode of Spongebob and how squidward tries to apologize for crossing the line but words cannot come out.
The art looks so much more improved and refine, the plot is thickening, and my pants are tightening.
Damn good job on this page! :D
Why Gian's afraid Mondo? - I'm wondering, Mondo isn't so scary. ;D
But Mondo wasn't so aggressive here. ;d
I wonder whose door that is...
It would be naive to think people like this comic for the story. You can't tell a story when you give one paragraph a month, even if it's epic. Seeing as this story hinges between terribly cliche and boring, that's nowhere near the case.
The art has gotten a bit better, even if the backgrounds are still too bland/nonexistent. I'd personally rather see black and white submissions, though, if that meant faster updates. If this comic truly has to have such a big "story", then updates must come faster. It's way too popular to update this slow with barely anything going on in each page.
This comic started purely on sex, and that's what people truly want, even if they don't admit it. Looking at the comments, most do admit it.
Show a bit more love to the comic instead of just using it as a way to merchant easily, because that's basically what it is at this point.
It's not "Simple as that :3"
It took them over 2 years to finish the 2nd arc, an eleven page chapter.
If this were truly a free comic this would not be the case, but they do use this as a foothold for so many commissions. That, and people had to pay to see 2 *very* important side-stories to understand what happens to Gian's first boyfriend and Olly/Mondo. It wouldn't been fine if they were only non-canon instances for fapping, but they are canon. The effects were already imminent by the fact that many people showed confusion as to why Mondo is going from "I'm gonna beat you up, fking faggot!" to "Hey dude, I'm sorry. Let's be friends." If people are starting to have to pay to see important stories of the comic, even though it was promised to be a free, updates have *got* to come more often.
That is the main criticism, and it is honest criticism. As I said, I wouldn't waste my time if I didn't care about the comic. If, by your definition, "fans" only say good things about their favorite artists (just like parents do with their kids), they'll never learn to grow and blossom. A true fan gives critique that shows the faults, not just the rainbows. If that is too difficult for you to understand, then I really can't waste my time with a helpless cause.
Secondly, now that you mention it, you do have some very valid points and I didn't know that you were trying to give constructive criticism at first. I automatically jumped to the wild conclusion that you were trolling. Once again, I admit I was wrong about that and I apologize for it. I understand now what you were trying to do and I hope we can both walk away from this without having a bad opinion about each other. *offers make-up hugs* o:
I was hoping Mondo would come around. I was SO PISSED at him the first time I saw him, because he completely ruined the "Justice Genome" of the Leomon line in the first arc.
Uh, and I was pissed because I saw my favorite digimon being a complete and total jerk.
Minor point of hilarity: I had to be told that Mondo was a leomon, because I couldn't recognize what he was. durr.
Gian: Ah your regrate fuels my immortality
+1 for continue :D
if you're happy and you know it,go sit in the corner and think about your life
...sorry couldnt resist