"Felis Draco" was going to be the sequel to "The Fox and the Dragon". However, circumstances in my life altered radically and I never got much beyond this. I include this part of it (there exists a fragment of the first chapter following this) simply to round out the story more fully. Of course, it could be said that the story is quite complete as it stands, but there we are.
Please do not expect any more of this story. It is not something I am likely ever to continue, as I have no real interest in so doing and it would require me to begin again as my writing style has altered too greatly in the intervening years.
That said, here it is.
Please do not expect any more of this story. It is not something I am likely ever to continue, as I have no real interest in so doing and it would require me to begin again as my writing style has altered too greatly in the intervening years.
That said, here it is.
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that was a rather sad, yet not quite unsatasfying ending. i wasn't expecting any more after the end of the previious story, but i suppose this gives a more defined ending. ^_^;
it's just a shame most people on FA ignore stories that aren't going to 'get them off in the first 3 minutes' ;3
though i am curious as to what was happening to you at the tiime. =(
it's just a shame most people on FA ignore stories that aren't going to 'get them off in the first 3 minutes' ;3
though i am curious as to what was happening to you at the tiime. =(
Nice. Really, the voice is rather sad in this, but people die in reality. You deal death and losing a loved one very beautifully in this one. Well written, well told.
Also; Tir-na-nOg. With some special characters somewhere in between. "Land of the eternal youth." Is it from Celtic mythology, perhaps? I know I have seen the name before... although, I remember the name in form "Tir Nan Og". But, this might be an error by my part.
Yup. This is probably the best chapter of the story ark. Sorry for my dour Finnish mentality, but I see beauty in the story. And no, I am not a Goth, death as such has nothing appealing to me. It's just a strong storytelling device, addition to everything else, and you use it very well in this story.
So, good work, I liked this.
Also; Tir-na-nOg. With some special characters somewhere in between. "Land of the eternal youth." Is it from Celtic mythology, perhaps? I know I have seen the name before... although, I remember the name in form "Tir Nan Og". But, this might be an error by my part.
Yup. This is probably the best chapter of the story ark. Sorry for my dour Finnish mentality, but I see beauty in the story. And no, I am not a Goth, death as such has nothing appealing to me. It's just a strong storytelling device, addition to everything else, and you use it very well in this story.
So, good work, I liked this.
Thank you... I'm glad you liked it.
It's probably best that it stopped where it did. I'd split up with the fox - well, he'd split up with me - and I'd got involved with a feline. This was... you can imagine what this was going to be. But that relationship was a rebound for us both and (perhaps fortunately) blew itself to pieces after a couple of months. So... there we go.
I never thought you were a goth. Death is part of life, and how we handle it says much about ourselves. It hurts to lose someone you love. And it hurts to think about them afterwards. That's how it is. The loss shades the joy a little. That's life.
Tír na nÓg is the Land of Eternal Youth in Celtic, and predominantly Irish, mythology.
It's probably best that it stopped where it did. I'd split up with the fox - well, he'd split up with me - and I'd got involved with a feline. This was... you can imagine what this was going to be. But that relationship was a rebound for us both and (perhaps fortunately) blew itself to pieces after a couple of months. So... there we go.
I never thought you were a goth. Death is part of life, and how we handle it says much about ourselves. It hurts to lose someone you love. And it hurts to think about them afterwards. That's how it is. The loss shades the joy a little. That's life.
Tír na nÓg is the Land of Eternal Youth in Celtic, and predominantly Irish, mythology.
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