2761 "Do you like me?"
10/07/2025 16:20
"Do you like ...me?" Іn a slightly surprised way, the Mystery girl asked, looking at him penetratingly.
And when Mark held out his hand, she slowly placed her palm in his, letting him lead her by the hand, and tell her about various little things, while showing her the house.
"Sorry, I'm probably too boring for you..." Mark sighed in disappointment.
"Oh no! That's not true at all. On the contrary, it was very curious.
It was just a bit unexpected. The first time in a rather long time, someone managed to arouse my curiosity." Replied the woman, smiling slightly, looking at him with black eyes, and not explaining anything.
***
This was just the beginning of their acquaintance, and at that moment, neither of them knew what would happen next and how it would end.
Delfina Alessia Jones - the first impressions. (But at the time, he didn't know that name yet, naming her just a Mystery girl. Or just "Mystery".)
Mark is touching her, telling her she's beautiful.
***
Behind the stage.
Star knew Mark's dreams and wanted to help hir Dad find his happiness, so shi helped him find a human woman he could love.
Star was very careful to meet two lonely souls, Mark and Delfina, with whom shi had an affair, watching what would happen.
Mark was happy! For some reason, he immediately liked this short, charming lady.
This was curious, thought Delfina. This man was different from those with whom she usually dealt in life. He was already married to a foxtaur, had an adopted chakat daughter, and he didn't even know her name!
She already had a rather controversial reputation, and people preferred to stay away from her. In the end, it was justified...
So Delfina also wanted this meeting.
***
Done privately. Some characters' development explaining.
Thank you for so a touching portrait, Seth!
Due to war and some ... other serious difficulties with my real life, I can slow down a bit and post various interesting things here less often.
***
Also, please note that my story is in the process of being written, and most of these small fragments that I published are not in chronological order.
(Chronology always was a real pain for me.) So when I finish my plans I will try to put everything in order. If I even can...
I publish my stories in "dynamic mode", according to the available pictures, time, current situations, my mood, or in connection with the previous posting, etc. So I can often ignore the chronology of events.
The story and all characters belong to me
Marksan
The wonderful drawings and most of character designs are kindly made for me by
SethTriggs For which I am very grateful for his help in portraying all this - because without his vision and pictures I would never have been able to tell this story. He really did a lot for me.
We still have "Tales of Chakona Discord for fans" - a cozy place where we usually gather. But after the recent ...flooding infestation, the rules were changed slightly. So ask around for an invite PM.
I am nice with talking to people. I swear. )))
10/07/2025 16:20
"Do you like ...me?" Іn a slightly surprised way, the Mystery girl asked, looking at him penetratingly.
And when Mark held out his hand, she slowly placed her palm in his, letting him lead her by the hand, and tell her about various little things, while showing her the house.
"Sorry, I'm probably too boring for you..." Mark sighed in disappointment.
"Oh no! That's not true at all. On the contrary, it was very curious.
It was just a bit unexpected. The first time in a rather long time, someone managed to arouse my curiosity." Replied the woman, smiling slightly, looking at him with black eyes, and not explaining anything.
***
This was just the beginning of their acquaintance, and at that moment, neither of them knew what would happen next and how it would end.
Delfina Alessia Jones - the first impressions. (But at the time, he didn't know that name yet, naming her just a Mystery girl. Or just "Mystery".)
Mark is touching her, telling her she's beautiful.
***
Behind the stage.
Star knew Mark's dreams and wanted to help hir Dad find his happiness, so shi helped him find a human woman he could love.
Star was very careful to meet two lonely souls, Mark and Delfina, with whom shi had an affair, watching what would happen.
Mark was happy! For some reason, he immediately liked this short, charming lady.
This was curious, thought Delfina. This man was different from those with whom she usually dealt in life. He was already married to a foxtaur, had an adopted chakat daughter, and he didn't even know her name!
She already had a rather controversial reputation, and people preferred to stay away from her. In the end, it was justified...
So Delfina also wanted this meeting.
***
Done privately. Some characters' development explaining.
Thank you for so a touching portrait, Seth!
Due to war and some ... other serious difficulties with my real life, I can slow down a bit and post various interesting things here less often.
***
Also, please note that my story is in the process of being written, and most of these small fragments that I published are not in chronological order.
(Chronology always was a real pain for me.) So when I finish my plans I will try to put everything in order. If I even can...
I publish my stories in "dynamic mode", according to the available pictures, time, current situations, my mood, or in connection with the previous posting, etc. So I can often ignore the chronology of events.
The story and all characters belong to me
MarksanThe wonderful drawings and most of character designs are kindly made for me by
SethTriggs For which I am very grateful for his help in portraying all this - because without his vision and pictures I would never have been able to tell this story. He really did a lot for me.We still have "Tales of Chakona Discord for fans" - a cozy place where we usually gather. But after the recent ...flooding infestation, the rules were changed slightly. So ask around for an invite PM.
I am nice with talking to people. I swear. )))
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Human
Size 416 x 750px
File Size 211.8 kB
Nice portrait, I’m gonna use this one for my own reference later:)
I think I may need a little more information on her background though, she clearly has her own past to deal with, especially if Mark is the first male she finds to be “different”, perhaps she has poor relationships with her previous male companions?
It’s interesting to learn your characters stories, my friend:)
I think I may need a little more information on her background though, she clearly has her own past to deal with, especially if Mark is the first male she finds to be “different”, perhaps she has poor relationships with her previous male companions?
It’s interesting to learn your characters stories, my friend:)
Delfina Alessia Jones is the oldest, the smartest, the richest, the most kinky, and the cruelest of all three spouses.
If very briefly, Mark was at war for so long that he went crazy and retired. And now he does all these things, enjoying his new life, and his wives, trying to make up for lost years.
Emily could not arrange a normal family life, and now she fanatically plays the role of wife and mother in their family, finally enjoying what she had long dreamed of.
Delfian/Mystery has experienced a lot of things. Cruelty, loss unborn child, was treated for a long time after a nervous breakdown, was in many unsuccessful relationships, and now she enjoys being with two spouses who love her for what she really is.
But this is only very briefly, because my story is very, very, very long and dark story.
If very briefly, Mark was at war for so long that he went crazy and retired. And now he does all these things, enjoying his new life, and his wives, trying to make up for lost years.
Emily could not arrange a normal family life, and now she fanatically plays the role of wife and mother in their family, finally enjoying what she had long dreamed of.
Delfian/Mystery has experienced a lot of things. Cruelty, loss unborn child, was treated for a long time after a nervous breakdown, was in many unsuccessful relationships, and now she enjoys being with two spouses who love her for what she really is.
But this is only very briefly, because my story is very, very, very long and dark story.
Thank you for the detailed information.
It’s somewhat of a honoured feeling to learn information that I couldn’t elsewhere. But be careful with what you share in your future story, Mark, while it is a perfectly common practice for writers to channel some of their real-life experience into their stories, entertainment is the key, creating conflicts or introducing dark backgrounds should aim for making the story complex, compelling and interesting to read; this is something I’ve noticed recently. In any case, if a conflict could promise an interesting storyline and effectively catch the reader’s attention, then sure, do it; that’s the entire premise of introducing conflicts essentially.
Thank you for reading this long self-compulsory analysis!
It’s somewhat of a honoured feeling to learn information that I couldn’t elsewhere. But be careful with what you share in your future story, Mark, while it is a perfectly common practice for writers to channel some of their real-life experience into their stories, entertainment is the key, creating conflicts or introducing dark backgrounds should aim for making the story complex, compelling and interesting to read; this is something I’ve noticed recently. In any case, if a conflict could promise an interesting storyline and effectively catch the reader’s attention, then sure, do it; that’s the entire premise of introducing conflicts essentially.
Thank you for reading this long self-compulsory analysis!
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