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wrote this morning, open to interpretation
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Your just tired you wrote a whole thing and it basicly means YOU NEED SLEEP your subconcious is screaming this also you just tried of drama I think you should take some time to relax and maby even spice up your life it seems that you need to change up your norm routines do something diffrent XD
heh, maybe... I know the second thing is true at any time in my life XD
as for sleep, I just woke up, had a pretty good sleep actually and have been sleeping pretty well, I think I got a bit sunburned yesterday though, I have that ache and cotton mouth I only get when that happens
as for changing up my routine? hmm... school is starting soon so that will be a change of pace to be sure
spicing up my life? I'm going kayaking down some rapids next week I think XD
and as for my subconscious screaming at me, well, it tends to do that, I find it entertaining to be honest
wanna chat?
as for sleep, I just woke up, had a pretty good sleep actually and have been sleeping pretty well, I think I got a bit sunburned yesterday though, I have that ache and cotton mouth I only get when that happens
as for changing up my routine? hmm... school is starting soon so that will be a change of pace to be sure
spicing up my life? I'm going kayaking down some rapids next week I think XD
and as for my subconscious screaming at me, well, it tends to do that, I find it entertaining to be honest
wanna chat?
I did indeed. It's a fine example of this kind of poetry. Don't hesitate to keep banging away on it, but that's up to you--some artists never touch the work again, others treat it like motorcycle mechanics work on their bike. But it contains that thin streak of pure gold that catches the eye and speaks to the inwards of the reader.
Interesting poem, I like it. You have a good point in the 5th verse. As for the 6th, we are all actors in this great play called life. Unfortunately for many people that play resembles Waiting for Godot, they wait for something or someone their whole life instead of enjoying, living full life. Why wait for something undefined when life won't wait for you. All we need for a purpose in life is already here, present, only hidden and waiting to be discovered ^^
No offense meant.
I can understand slang spelling or when someone doesn't know how to write English words or names (e. g. Washington so writes by pronunciation Vašington) but I can't understand why some people add letters that don't exist in our alphabet in our words. It's not about ignorance so they don't know how to write words but rather they do it because it "looks cool" (e. g. vlak [train] as wlak or eksplozija [explosion] as explozija). Slang is ok but forceful merging of two languages is wrong. I appreciate both English and Croatian as a separate and rich languages.
I'm not familiar with the word cumbersome, care to explain what does it mean?
I can understand slang spelling or when someone doesn't know how to write English words or names (e. g. Washington so writes by pronunciation Vašington) but I can't understand why some people add letters that don't exist in our alphabet in our words. It's not about ignorance so they don't know how to write words but rather they do it because it "looks cool" (e. g. vlak [train] as wlak or eksplozija [explosion] as explozija). Slang is ok but forceful merging of two languages is wrong. I appreciate both English and Croatian as a separate and rich languages.
I'm not familiar with the word cumbersome, care to explain what does it mean?
ah, I misunderstood you, didn't realize you were actually talking about Croatzia.
also, I'm not savvy to the croatian language. it's fun to hear, but I don't speak it.
cumbersome; literally: difficult to handle or use especially because of size or weight
in this context, the concept weighs down my mind in some ways
also, I'm not savvy to the croatian language. it's fun to hear, but I don't speak it.
cumbersome; literally: difficult to handle or use especially because of size or weight
in this context, the concept weighs down my mind in some ways
Read it, relate with it. Feels like Bi polar... running from things you want to face but can't because you can't control where they are coming from, tired of the same old same old. Looking for something tangible, real, simple, clean and innocent. Frustration of loneliness in life, sometimes to get over the empty its easier to just sleep away the time.
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