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Wisps of Red Smoke

By Mnementh,
posted 14 years ago Writer | Support me with Shinies!

Things hit me hard today but this time I felt an urge to write a poem about it, I feel a bit better after doing so. Writing has always been my hobby, I need to stop neglecting it.

This poem is very raw, I started off rhyming and then just let words flow however they fall, sort of how I feel my own emotions just go where ever they want.

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Ferron_Arrumekan ~ferronarrumekan

Musician

14 years ago

Such a strong feeling in it really. I hope all is well for you Nemmy

Mnementh ~mnementh

Writer

14 years ago

I thought I was well, then it all blew up again, so I dunno. Thanks thought~

goldensunguru7 ~goldensunguru7

Watcher

14 years ago

I'll admit, that made me cry a bit :c

Mnementh ~mnementh

Writer

14 years ago

It's made me cry a whole lot more =/

goldensunguru7 ~goldensunguru7

Watcher

14 years ago

T_T I can only imagine... *hugs tight*

EndlessHunter ~endlesshunter

Digital Artist

14 years ago

Such vivid writing you have there. Felt each word you wrote. *hugs tightly*

Mnementh ~mnementh

Writer

14 years ago

*hugs back softly* Thank you Aurana

EndlessHunter ~endlesshunter

Digital Artist

14 years ago

Anytime =)

Madame ~madame

Digital Artist

14 years ago

That was very beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

Mnementh ~mnementh

Writer

14 years ago

I wouldn't call anything there beautiful but I know what you mean. Thank you, it was good to get it off my chest

FreakieeBunny ~freakieebunny

Writer

14 years ago

amazing write<3 made a few tears slip... beautiful.

Mnementh ~mnementh

Writer

14 years ago

It was tough to recall and write all this without a few tears of my own slipping. Thanks for the comment though~

whatsitallabout ~whatsitallabout

Watcher

14 years ago

Good job Nemmy, that was extremely well done.

Mnementh ~mnementh

Writer

14 years ago

Thanks man, it came out easily enough, I guess I was bottling it all up

Raitsh ~raitsh

Anthro Artist

14 years ago

It's not like I don't have a clue for everything, but this thing full of emotions made everything so much more clear and better to understand.
*hugs you close*
You'll be a strong dragon again, who will be able to fly higher than ever before!

Mnementh ~mnementh

Writer

14 years ago

*hugs you back tightly*
As long as I have dear friends like you I'm sure I will be strong again, I just wish I knew when that would be.

ObsidianWolfess ~obsidianwolfess

Kaiju wrangler

14 years ago

This poem is really beautiful. I never knew you were a writer. I'd love to illustrate some of your poems some time. A favor to an exceptionally wonderful friend. ::Hugs:: You're strong, always will be.

Mnementh ~mnementh

Writer

14 years ago

*hugs back gently* Well when I say I enjoy writing it's usually short stories of a playful nature, this is really the first poem I've written in ages, probably since they made me write 'em in high school.

Thank you though *licks your nose* ^^

ObsidianWolfess ~obsidianwolfess

Kaiju wrangler

14 years ago

Awr, you're welcome. I used to write poetry a lot in middle school, and a little in high school. I totally appreciate good literature when I see it. :3

bakel ~bakel

Watcher

14 years ago

Thats really, really good Nemmy. It does have a flow to it, and definitely invoked emotions..

Mnementh ~mnementh

Writer

14 years ago

*smiles* Thank you for the reply, Bakel *nosebumps gently*

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