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OK, so the non-actiony part lasted a little longer, but no problem. It involved some fun wordplay, and I personally find that just as epic. However, we needed to introduce the plot. And I enjoyed writing Derpy's part in this, too.
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OK, so the non-actiony part lasted a little longer, but no problem. It involved some fun wordplay, and I personally find that just as epic. However, we needed to introduce the plot. And I enjoyed writing Derpy's part in this, too.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Horse
Size 120 x 99px
File Size 8.3 kB
I felt this was a little rushed and a little too convenient that the Doctor just figured it all out even before he didn't really have any idea (17 possibilities). I would have liked to see more between Diamond and Twilight. Still overall pretty good story and quite interesting so far.
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