aw man
that face on the lasp panal is so priceless XD

Ah-hah! I was wondering why the roach clip wouldn't help but a paperclip would. The expressions in this are just seriously fucking killing me.

You can't scrape with a roach clip, Ray, JEEZE.

TOTALLY USELESS.

It seems many people like being in the dark, but I like light, lots of it.

Hahah, I LOVE both the bottom expression and the one above it. XD The expression on the 7th panel makes me think of how my mother answers the door.

it reminds me of Mr. Horse from the Nipple Salesman episode...
"Did my wife send you?"

This page makes me smile.. x3

haha, the paperclips in the background.

I heard the Lime in the Coconut guy chanting "paperclip paperclip paperclip!" when I looked at it.

One track mind....

lol that panel where she opens the door

TOTTAL deer in the headlights look XD

thats why shes a deer I guess... lots of vacant expressions

and uh..whats that green thing?

:O

*le gasp

you dont even know??

haha love the last frame

DR PEPPER <3

redundant comment: THE EXPRESSIONS, DUDE! <3

<333 glad you are enjoying them!

Can't you scrape with a safety pin? Just be careful

Safety pins are not long enough :(

he is soooo in love

also, you might wanna check out rocky, its a swedish semi-autobiographical funny animal cartoon that is mainly focused on small everyday situations and crazy dialogue. Ive been reading it for a decade and it is awesomesauce: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rocky_.....omic_strip%29. There is an English translation of it too.

Link goes to nothing D:

iii dunno how to format links on this site, you'll have to search :I

This page has much more life, I hope it continues in this vein :)

I'm trying to get the hang of it! What helped this page, do you think?

Play with expressions, silliness. A very mundane thing as being given a paperclip became something exciting and wonderful.
I can tell with the first few pages you were just trying to quickly get through the setup part so you could move on to the fun stuff. But you have to remember, if you don't grab the reader from the first page, they probably won't continue reading.

I kept trying to think of good ways to start the story and moving in seemed like the best start, but besides the mundane actions of moving in, I had a hard time trying to hook readers. I have some grand expectations for Ay Tu but for now I'm just trying to introduce characters and help the readers settle in to them.

I've always been too intimidated to start a comic, I'm just happy I can share my characters with people in a story. But if there is ever anything you could point out to help as I go, I'd definitely hear it :)

Okay! I definitely will, then. ^_^ I wish I could do a comic! all these stories telling themselves in my head and no real way to express it, comics are sooo much work.

This is hilarious. You're the master of expressions.
Also, one would assume Ray has something with which to USE that roach clip. Strike up a conversation! Quick!

Soon, SOON!