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Tye is the school outcast. Alone and cut off from the rest of society, he enjoys the pleasures of being left alone. Kylo is the new kid in the school. Silent, awkward, and in desperate need of interaction. No two people could be any more different, yet, they both have dark pasts which will bring them closer together than they could possibly imagine. Together they must work to put the pieces together of their pasts to find the answers they've waited their whole lives to find.
Tye is having trouble finding the money necessary in order to live with his brother, but he's found an alternative form of payment. Unfortunately he needs to sacrifice something he's never had to give up: his pride. But is his brother a strong enough reason to continue?
Tye is having trouble finding the money necessary in order to live with his brother, but he's found an alternative form of payment. Unfortunately he needs to sacrifice something he's never had to give up: his pride. But is his brother a strong enough reason to continue?
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DUDE, really awesome job yet again.
You know, after each chapter you bring out I get all these different ideas in my head of what's going on that you haven't told yet, and what happens next, like, I always love it when I see your stuff in my submissions. The way this chapter ended was interesting, sorta like when Tye would push out the thought that he and Kylo were friends, ahah,, can't wait to see what develops from that.
Also,, I dunno, I just love the way you write. Like, you give a good description of everything to make the set the scene and show how people feel, how they act and such, but you don't go into too much detail that'd make it boring. You haven't drabbled on, which a fair few published have done and lost my interest.
And I've noticed sometimes that artists/writers/musicians/everythingelse include themes relating to the arts in their work. So, I wanna ask, when you write, is it like how Kylo writes? (Or the other way around, ahah) Because where he was explaining how he had a story in his mind and the words just came out seemed like a part of yourself that you've put in. Though, have you got like, files on your computer, or pages in a notebook or something, of planning, or notes and that? Because it really shows that you've put in heaps of effort, and not just letting your hand write away.
Yeah, favourited.
You know, after each chapter you bring out I get all these different ideas in my head of what's going on that you haven't told yet, and what happens next, like, I always love it when I see your stuff in my submissions. The way this chapter ended was interesting, sorta like when Tye would push out the thought that he and Kylo were friends, ahah,, can't wait to see what develops from that.
Also,, I dunno, I just love the way you write. Like, you give a good description of everything to make the set the scene and show how people feel, how they act and such, but you don't go into too much detail that'd make it boring. You haven't drabbled on, which a fair few published have done and lost my interest.
And I've noticed sometimes that artists/writers/musicians/everythingelse include themes relating to the arts in their work. So, I wanna ask, when you write, is it like how Kylo writes? (Or the other way around, ahah) Because where he was explaining how he had a story in his mind and the words just came out seemed like a part of yourself that you've put in. Though, have you got like, files on your computer, or pages in a notebook or something, of planning, or notes and that? Because it really shows that you've put in heaps of effort, and not just letting your hand write away.
Yeah, favourited.
haha. Thanks again for your input Mulley. Actually, I do write as Kylo described. I don't really plan that much beyond a simple idea of what I want in a chapter. Like, in this one I knew I wanted a way that Tye could find money. As I was writing though, my mind just expanded it into involving Lance, then Kylo becoming solemn, and Tye being confused with his friendship. I've never really planned everything out into detail. Sure, I've got things planned for later chapters, but they're just ideas. The whole story comes as I'm writing it.
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