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Zion: Light of the New Moon, Ch 4.0

By comidacomida,
posted 14 years ago Writer

Chapter 3 has come to a close and Chapter 4 is soon to follow.

A new Event Arc for each party means a new vote. Make sure you get your votes and contributions in by Thursday, July 28th-- you have until midnight (pst)... and yes, you heard right: Thursday!

I also advise going back to check on all of the individual chapters if you're a contributing reader-- some of you have group votes in which to take part!

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Onissarle ~onissarle

Digital Artist

14 years ago

Bannihar for favour. Their luck is buggered, they need all the help they can get.

It looks like there are som interesting story arcs this time around.

I'm hoping for the following...

Myrh - Fallen from grace
Bannihar - A little problem (A chance for Elias to go undergound? Booyah!)

I'll ponder over my actual votes later, when I have more time. Are there any that folks would particularly like for their groups?

snofox ~snofox

14 years ago

sure you don't mean Myre for fallen from grace? >.>;

Onissarle ~onissarle

Digital Artist

14 years ago

As far as I'm aware, "Fallen from Grace" isn't referring to the drug 'Grace' that has been used in previous chapters and is a more general statement. Perhaps Comida can clarify that?

comidacomida ~comidacomida

Writer

14 years ago

In this case, Grace is NOT referring to the drug. :)

Onissarle ~onissarle

Digital Artist

14 years ago

Thanks for the clarification. *chuckle* You have to admit, it is a bit confusing.

snofox ~snofox

14 years ago

Still... I'm good at puzzles ^^;

snofox ~snofox

14 years ago

I also have a (shorter-than-usual) addition to my charchter's story here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6208065

wolf_skinchanger ~wolfskinchanger

Photographer

14 years ago

Well, I'm kinda hoping for "Fart Attood" for Myre, but that's just me.

wolf_skinchanger ~wolfskinchanger

Photographer

14 years ago

Sorry; FORT Attood.

comidacomida ~comidacomida

Writer

14 years ago

I lol'ed :)

Silverhair ~silverhair

Anthro Artist

14 years ago

Bannihar for favour.

Bannihar - A little problem

Doen - She's Miss Taken

Myre - Fort Attood

Myrh - We need a break, vote Fallen From Grace for us please.

Shrad - Elemental, my Dear Watson

I may change my votes depending on what the wants of the other groups are.

wolf_skinchanger ~wolfskinchanger

Photographer

14 years ago

What do you mean, you need a break? Out of all of us, Myrh has the greatest luck and favor.

Silverhair ~silverhair

Anthro Artist

14 years ago

True, but we're reaching our limits. I, for one, know when to put the breaks on. Yes, the other groups need a quick rest too. But they should have been paying attention to their limits better and trying for less difficult events.

But, in the end, it all come down the the rolls of the dice and the mercy of the GM.

wolf_skinchanger ~wolfskinchanger

Photographer

14 years ago

Believe me, I have been.

Onissarle ~onissarle

Digital Artist

14 years ago

Me too, but the dice are horribly random things aren't they? *chuckle*

My Myrh character has effectively been killed in two chapters running, despite me doing everything I possibly could to keep her safe in chapter 3, and is now completely out of willpower for the next two chapters.

I'm definitely siding with the lowest complexity option for them this time around.

Zala ~zala

Watcher

14 years ago

My votes:

Myrh - Fallen From Grace

AND

Bannihar - A Little Problem

wolf_skinchanger ~wolfskinchanger

Photographer

14 years ago

(Luck may decrease if a character is saved)

Can you elaborate on that?

Silverhair ~silverhair

Anthro Artist

14 years ago

Non-contributing readers get to elect on weather or not the group should spend 1 point in luck per player at deaths door to save them.

wolf_skinchanger ~wolfskinchanger

Photographer

14 years ago

Oh, okay; yeah; derp.

comidacomida ~comidacomida

Writer

14 years ago

What ^^he^^ said. :)

Dharken ~dharken

Anthro Artist

14 years ago

I vote for:

Myrh - Fallen from grace

and

Bannihar - A little problem

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Onissarle ~onissarle

Digital Artist

14 years ago

I'll vote for that. Let's hope someone kidnaps Majh, that would be hilarious.

wolf_skinchanger ~wolfskinchanger

Photographer

14 years ago

...I'm suddenly reminded of the "Talespin" episode "Ransom of the Red Chimp."

Onissarle ~onissarle

Digital Artist

14 years ago

*hums the theme tune*

wolf_skinchanger ~wolfskinchanger

Photographer

14 years ago

"Spin it!"

wolf_skinchanger ~wolfskinchanger

Photographer

14 years ago

Bannihar: A Little Problem
Doen:Sibling Revelry
Myre: Personally hoping for "Fort Attood"(Cute pun, by the way)
Myrh: Fallen from Grace
Shrad: She's Miss Taken

Bannihar for favor.

comidacomida ~comidacomida

Writer

14 years ago

There are some obvious and not-so-obvious puns thrown around here-and-there in the titles.
See if you can find them all! :D

wolf_skinchanger ~wolfskinchanger

Photographer

14 years ago

Probably not; I'm dense, first of all, so the not-so-obvious would obviously escape me... and what seems obvious to you may not be to someone who happened to miss whatever "popular" reference that you happen to be referencing; I know this because not everybody gets my Redwall jokes.

comidacomida ~comidacomida

Writer

14 years ago

good series!
been awhile since I read it though.

wolf_skinchanger ~wolfskinchanger

Photographer

14 years ago

Yeah, same here; but I just recently got hold of "Sable Queen", so all's well... unless another one comes out; then I won't have read them all anymore.

Chikara ~chikara

14 years ago

Story arc votes:

Myrh - Fallen from grace
Bannihar - A little problem

Onissarle ~onissarle

Digital Artist

14 years ago

Onissarle ~onissarle

Digital Artist

14 years ago

Short story for Artemisia. Only about 2000 words this time. I'm going to try to keep my story submissions around this long instead of the huge ones like South Wall, Guard Duty, and Cause and Effect. I think they drop better between chapters if they're just little aside snippets.

"Faces of Death"

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6186934/

cyberhorn_the_dragon ~cyberhornthedragon

Writer

14 years ago

Story arc votes:

Myrh - Fallen from grace

annnnnd

Bannihar - A little problem

Jragonfang ~jragonfang

Watcher

14 years ago

Personally, I'm hoping for She's Miss Taken or A Little Problem for my group of Myre. I say we shouldn't break until everything's getting REALLY tough, meaning all complexities are near 5 and 4.

Rocelin13 ~rocelin13

Writer

14 years ago

Bannihar: A Little Problem
Doen: She's Miss Taken
Myrh: Fallen From Grace
Shard: Sibling Revelry

Rocelin13 ~rocelin13

Writer

14 years ago

And I have to give the group vote to Bannihar. They are suffering at the moment and they need a little boost.

Onissarle ~onissarle

Digital Artist

14 years ago

Many thanks *chuckle*

Beo_subby ~beosubby

Writer

14 years ago

Bannihar: Elemental my dear watson
Doen: Sibling Revelry
Myre: Fallen From Grace
Myrh: Can't
Shrad: Can't (but I would like A Little Problem)

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Rakkotsune ~rakkotsune

Digital Artist

14 years ago

Changed my votes:
Bannihar - Elemental, My Dear Watson
Shrad - Sibling Revelry

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TatsuAikuchi ~tatsuaikuchi

Writer

14 years ago

Bannihar: Elemental, My Dear Watson
Shrad: A Little Problem

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Jimpy ~jimperator

14 years ago

Sibling Revelry for Shrad.

KAIN2022 ~kain2022

Traditional/Digital Artist

14 years ago

Bannihar: Elemental, My Dear Watson
Shrad: A Little Problem

dragonsintheattic ~dragonsintheattic

Digital Artist

14 years ago

Myrh - Fallen from grace
Bannihar - A little problem
Shrad - She's miss taken
Myre - Fort Attood

Onissarle ~onissarle

Digital Artist

14 years ago

Time for me to weigh in a couple of votes.

I'm going to back Shadow and vote:

Shrad - She's Miss taken

and back Wolf_skinchanger on:

Myre - Fort Attood

I haven't seen much specific interest in a particular arc for Doen. Anyone have a preference between the ones left?

Tobbi ~tobbi

Watcher

14 years ago

I vote Bannihar for favor!

Arc Votes:
Bannihar: A little problem
Doen: Elemental, my Dear Watson
Myre: Fort Attood
Myrh: Fallen from grace
Shard: N/A

Hmm, if shard does get She's Miss Taken, I'm not sure that Majh will be the one to be whisked away. Shes kinda buff xD

...She's Miss Taken...
...She's MissTaken...
...MissTaken...
...Mistaken? xP what a pun :D

comidacomida ~comidacomida

Writer

14 years ago

Thank you.
That IS what I was aiming for.

Of course, considering the pun, if Shrad wins it, maybe it's Tolen that's kidnapped because someone THINKS he's a she. :)

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comidacomida ~comidacomida

Writer

14 years ago

Fort Attood.

Fortitude: (n), strength and firmness of mind; resolute endurance

Onissarle ~onissarle

Digital Artist

14 years ago

Following a request from a Doen player, my final arc vote goes to :

Doen - Sibling Revelry

XP Votes:

Doen - Rust
Myre - Anor Roc
Shrad - Tolen

Onissarle ~onissarle

Digital Artist

14 years ago

Short story for Elias focusing on when he regains consciousness while Kayte is tending him. Quite heavy of character development for Elias.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6199756/

comidacomida ~comidacomida

Writer

14 years ago

Point to Elias, I assume?

Onissarle ~onissarle

Digital Artist

14 years ago

Yup

Path ~path

Watcher

14 years ago

Shrad - She's Miss taken
Myre - Fort Attood
Myrh - Fallen from grace
Bannihar - A little

I vote Bannihar

Xar ~xar

Watcher

14 years ago

Another snippet from the Shradian arctic fox... I'll put it for luck in our group.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6200727

Voting Shrad for favor.

Drachetto ~drachetto

Paws,Macro,Fursuiter,Photografur

14 years ago

Vote Shrad for favor, bonus XP vote for Shrad: Loric

Giran ~giran

Watcher

14 years ago

Voting Shrad for favor
Bonus xp to Loric (Shrad)

RedFoxy ~redfoxy

Fursuiter

14 years ago

Vote Shrad for favor, bonus XP vote for Shrad: Loric

greekyoshi ~greekyoshi

14 years ago

Vote Shrad for favor, bonus XP vote for Shrad: Loric

snofox ~snofox

14 years ago

Bannihar: Elemental, My Dear Watson
Doen: She's Miss Taken
Myre: N/A
Myrh: Fort Attood
Shrad: A Little Problem

snofox ~snofox

14 years ago

changing shrad vote to Sibling Revelry

Also, favor for Shrad and character xp to Loric

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comidacomida ~comidacomida

Writer

14 years ago

Bannihar has "A Little Problem" by quite a few votes.

Right now it's a toss-up between "She's Miss-Taken" and "Sibling Revelry".

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comidacomida ~comidacomida

Writer

14 years ago

Well... there's always the use of willpower to cement your choice firmly within the realm of "possible".... nobody seems to be making use of that. :)

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comidacomida ~comidacomida

Writer

14 years ago

You could have used a Willpower to increase the chance, yes.
Cut-off time for votes, however, was midnight on Thursday.

comidacomida ~comidacomida

Writer

14 years ago

If it's any consolation, having used the willpower would not have done any good... Shrad was too far behind Bannihar for it to have made a difference.

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